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The agony of love lost pierces the heart and contorts the soul. Betrayal severs forever bonds, draining the heart of love and the soul of faith. You call upon feelings your heart stored in memory; to carry you through this ordeal. Because love and hate hold opposite sides of the same coin, luck magnifies expectations. We all have egos and pride, often to our detriment when young; freshly weaned off innocence. You feel you know your future; then, bam; fate's fake facade crumbles. Falling out of love empties your heart, tear by tear. And sadness surges from your core; melding with reality in quiet acceptance. Lost in deceit's frightening fog; you break out laughing and crying simultaneously! Life's a conundrum; it seems receptive to your wants yet non-responsive to your needs. True love is elusive; doubt haunts its fringes, but so, too, does hope! A spontaneous eruption of feelings that doesn't respect rules and conditions; love is hard to categorize, for it seldom adheres to logic or accepted norms.

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:57:00 PM
Beautiful verse,Emile , congratulations your win. Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Eve, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/15/2020 5:33:00 PM
Really nice penning Emile. I think we can find all heads nodding at the wisdom expressed in this poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/15/2020 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam, your wonderful comments have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2019 8:34:00 AM
Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.
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Date: 11/15/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Funom, your comments have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2019 12:22:00 PM
So true, well said dear poet!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

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