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Melange

Smoked, lavender skies, Melting into sun's ocean, Frothing rocky shores.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 3:12:00 PM

Something to melt into the mind. Sounds like a dream we'd all like to have.

Date: 2/28/2010 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful poem with creative imagery. I like how the first two lines work together. You painted a picture with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:57:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Robert, a gem of a write >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2010 4:18:00 PM

Fantastic words Robert.. luv that title too.. my recent poem posted is about the loss of my sweet Mother.. most who read think its a great luv or husband but alas..NO..its about my Mom who died Thanksgiving Day..appreciate u seeing the beauty in the poem Robert.. thankxxx.... I posted a blog about poetry today if u care to comment..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/22/2010 1:40:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku, Robert. And thank you for leaving kind comments on my poem. ....Jimmy

Linda Witt-King

Date: 2/20/2010 6:27:00 PM

Sounds delicious, doesn't it? Makes me think of smoked lox on bagel, melting cream cheese on warm toast, frothing hot coffee...oh, that wasn't what you meant? silly me...for some reason I'm on a haiku roll. I hear sentences in the pattern, think thoughts in the pattern. I know, it's all Raul's fault. We'll blame it on him. How you doing, my friend?

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/19/2010 11:23:00 PM

You really pictured it clearly with meaningful thoughts. Very nice haiku, Robert. Appreciate for your comments on mine. (^_^) Noel.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/19/2010 4:46:00 PM

Beautiful. Lovely haiku. Thank you Robert for your comments on Playing The Game. I have forgotten the game and remembered his words all thse years. I lost my son eleven years ago next Monday.. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2010 9:19:00 AM

Great haiku, Robert. Very descriptive!!

Daver Austin

Date: 2/19/2010 7:52:00 AM

Yep! I'm sittin' right there on the beach with ya. Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/18/2010 5:23:00 PM

very beautiful and descriptive!!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/18/2010 4:12:00 PM

funny how one ocean gives the sun and the other takes it away. john

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/15/2010 10:17:00 PM

Great Haiku! Robert! WOW! interesting wording. Good luck on the contest. Melange is French. I like the title. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. I am glad you found inspiration in my poem this morning. Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/15/2010 7:47:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/15/2010 7:32:00 PM

Check ou the finished version of the poem that Sara and I wrote together. Thnks for your comments!! and encouragement.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/15/2010 7:23:00 PM

pretty, enjoyed

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2010 2:18:00 PM

Beautiful description of the photo, Robert! I like the image of the skies "Melting into sun's ocean." A wonderful haiku! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2010 8:06:00 AM

Oh wow....even the title is amazing! Great writing, Robert! Carrie

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 2/15/2010 6:06:00 AM

You have my mind seating me in that scene. Wonderful poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 5:34:00 AM

Interesting description of the scene. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara