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In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy, The corridors are full of whispers calling; I open a door to a land green and steamy. It seems a thousand birds are in trees leafy, Their wild sonorous song like violins whining; In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy. I walk a dream forest and my mind goes freely, All about is enchantment surreal and twining; I open a door to a land green and steamy. Lush tendrils reach out with fingers thorny, And murmurous hummingbirds glide stunning; In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy. Lovely flowers in every hue seem so sleepy, Oh the butterflies are so colorful and dazzling; I open a door to a land green and steamy. This arcane dream so eerie with winds breezy, My journey gorgeous, divine and winding; In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy, I open a door to a land green and steamy. ____________________________ April 28, 2016 Poetry/Villanelle/Meditation - Vision Copyright Protected, ID 16-783-448-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, More Than The eye Can See sponsor, Mystic Rose First Place

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Date: 10/20/2016 7:55:00 AM
Love this form and love this poem, you are the queen of amazing forms lovely Broken Wings....congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 4/29/2016 1:02:00 PM
Beautifully done! A wonderful imaginative voyage. :-)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2016 2:00:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much for the beautiful and the wonderful ~~
Date: 4/28/2016 3:05:00 PM
- Sounds delicious, beautiful written B.W. -#7- Luck in contest - hugs // Sun :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2016 3:24:00 PM
Sunshine, thanks for the beautiful and the 7 ~~
Date: 4/28/2016 12:19:00 PM
This is a lovely piece, Broken Wings. One wishes to be with you on the journey and to see with your eyes...all the marvels. Good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2016 12:35:00 PM
Eileen, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ~~
Date: 4/28/2016 10:57:00 AM
Lovely piece. To open a door to a vivid imagination is to find another world. Well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:38:00 PM
Barry, thanks for the lovely and the compliment
Date: 4/28/2016 10:52:00 AM
Constance, I love this form for you! Thank you for giving me a peek inside your imagination:), jill
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:42:00 PM
Jill, I like the form also, and thanks for the visit ~!!!
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