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Means of Relief

We walk in measured paces, pursuing our wants and our needs. And with smiles stamped on false faces, we follow fortune where it leads. Ambition fuels constant stress 'cause only success will suffice. And affection is worth far less, when sex is a matter of price. If hell is nothing but a lie, there's no need for absolution. But seeking revenge when we die, faith promises retribution. Religion defends against wrongs, allowing the maligned to cope. And using rituals and psalms, it imbues wretched souls with hope. Faith fosters exasperation, and yet, we defend blind belief. For despite tears of frustration, it's our only means of relief. (Quatrain) 3/11/2015

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Date: 2/25/2018 3:01:00 PM
What a dark poem, Emile. Hope and seeing justice does come at a cost. Faith certainly is a form of organized relief for the "maligned". Strong poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Line all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2015 8:49:00 AM
Excellent observation in to means of relief. Nicely expressed my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/12/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much BL, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 3/11/2015 5:43:00 PM
Dear Emile, Mystic is right you have a great talent my young friend, and we will keep reading as long as you write such wonderful poetry that comes from your epic heart, love this every single line is just beautiful, cheri ps glade you liked my cookie poem it's yummy lol
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank so much Cherl, I treasure your visits. Emile.
Date: 3/11/2015 3:07:00 PM
this wonderful write has a profound feel without being preachy, emile... you uplift!.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I always enjoy your visits. Emile
Date: 3/11/2015 9:48:00 AM
Ah!!!! such deep and profound observations, Emile. Great writing, Elaine
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Date: 3/11/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Elaine, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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