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There is a lark who is born to live in the meadow, perched far above the smooth mountain stones. She will rise from fields of the cloverleaf cradles, with a foxglove petal, riding her wings. A feather she's worn, will flutter on down, to welcome us here, and to tickle our nose. With a moment to cling, it is soft as a dream; then it lifts into streams, of the sweet morning breeze. She must sing from the heart, to awaken the dawn. Her valor will linger, in the late morning sun. Her tempo, announces a thaw in the spring, Bringing a promise, of flowers and green. Her voice has a cadence, a solo, ascending, that comes with an encore, tremolos impending, so fragile, it harks as a piccolo, playing. She circles at dawn, to wake you and cheer you. But at sundown, she croons, a soprano to soothe you. She's a lark from a meadow, that mellows the heart
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:51:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie: .... on your high placement in the contest. Meadowlarks are a beautiful creation and you have captured the spirit of this in your words. SuZ
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Date: 11/22/2015 10:54:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work Carrie!
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Date: 11/22/2015 5:07:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. So deserving on your wonderful placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/22/2015 3:31:00 PM
congrats on the win Carrie
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Date: 11/22/2015 11:00:00 AM
Beautiful imagery... full of life! Congrats on your win (For the Birds)!! Terry
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:12:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:38:00 AM
Left me with a smile, congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:21:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:11:00 PM
WOW, the beauty of being a bird... SK
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:52:00 PM
Beautiful piece a 7 and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:34:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Carrie. If you had not overused your commas, it would have been in top three. As usual, you employed wonderful imagery. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:54:00 PM
A bad habit I have.... but thank you for the placement !!
Date: 5/17/2015 4:31:00 PM
Sweet place to live and sweet songs sung. "Thaw in the spring... flowers and green." That is just like you and a great poem. Best well wishes.
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Date: 5/15/2015 7:23:00 PM
Congrats on becoming a new premium lifetime member. -Alexis
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Date: 5/13/2015 10:27:00 AM
So enjoyed your poem Carrie.. we have so many meadow larks around here, I hear them singing and smile. BG
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Date: 5/13/2015 6:25:00 AM
Hi, Carrie, what a beautiful and informative poem you have penned about the lark. Luck to you in the contest. A 7 rating. ...Darlene
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Date: 5/13/2015 3:14:00 AM
So very pretty! I could almost hear you chirping some beautiful notes and fluttering your wings ! very charming Carrie...Hugs, Deb
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Date: 5/13/2015 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful personification - we chose the same species but I went for a meadow lark:-) Hugs Jan good luck in the contest xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:39:00 AM
This is so pretty!! All the best for the contest, dear Carrie!! :D :D :D
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Date: 5/12/2015 10:54:00 PM
Hello Carrie... nicely written with giving me an insight to the life of a fine bird - thank you Carrie - Lindsay
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:58:00 PM
A charming chant of imagery! Best wishes for the contest, Carrie...
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