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Meadowlark

There is a lark who is born to live in the meadow, perched far above the smooth mountain stones. She will rise from fields of the cloverleaf cradles, with a foxglove petal, riding her wings. A feather she's worn, will flutter on down, to welcome us here, and to tickle our nose. With a moment to cling, it is soft as a dream; then it lifts into streams, of the sweet morning breeze. She must sing from the heart, to awaken the dawn. Her valor will linger, in the late morning sun. Her tempo, announces a thaw in the spring, Bringing a promise, of flowers and green. Her voice has a cadence, a solo, ascending, that comes with an encore, tremolos impending, so fragile, it harks as a piccolo, playing. She circles at dawn, to wake you and cheer you. But at sundown, she croons, a soprano to soothe you. She's a lark from a meadow, that mellows the heart
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A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
Delaney Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations, Carrie: .... on your high placement in the contest. Meadowlarks are a beautiful creation and you have captured the spirit of this in your words. SuZ
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work Carrie!
Haight Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Lovely, Carrie. So deserving on your wonderful placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 3:31 PM
congrats on the win Carrie
O'Leary Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Beautiful imagery... full of life! Congrats on your win (For the Birds)!! Terry
Merryman Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
Ebbs Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Left me with a smile, congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:21 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 11:11 PM
WOW, the beauty of being a bird... SK
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful piece a 7 and congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:34 PM
This is gorgeous, Carrie. If you had not overused your commas, it would have been in top three. As usual, you employed wonderful imagery. Congrats in my contest.
Richards Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:54 PM
A bad habit I have.... but thank you for the placement !!
Zerbst Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Sweet place to live and sweet songs sung. "Thaw in the spring... flowers and green." That is just like you and a great poem. Best well wishes.
Y. Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Congrats on becoming a new premium lifetime member. -Alexis
Gorelick Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 10:27 AM
So enjoyed your poem Carrie.. we have so many meadow larks around here, I hear them singing and smile. BG
Gifford Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Hi, Carrie, what a beautiful and informative poem you have penned about the lark. Luck to you in the contest. A 7 rating. ...Darlene
Wilson Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:14 AM
So very pretty! I could almost hear you chirping some beautiful notes and fluttering your wings ! very charming Carrie...Hugs, Deb
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 1:22 AM
Beautiful personification - we chose the same species but I went for a meadow lark:-) Hugs Jan good luck in the contest xx 7 xx
Rv Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 12:39 AM
This is so pretty!! All the best for the contest, dear Carrie!! :D :D :D
Laurie Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Hello Carrie... nicely written with giving me an insight to the life of a fine bird - thank you Carrie - Lindsay
Ackerson Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:58 PM
A charming chant of imagery! Best wishes for the contest, Carrie...
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