Me

I seldom look in
the mirror anymore,
my razor-blade with an 
edge of jagged rust – 

gave up “Creature features” 
with my early need to scare 
a girl into my arms at the theater  

a shower a day takes care of 
most else – but when hairs, none
left on the head, become the
household's main blight, an old
barber's scissor in my wife's
scepter-ed hand, make my beard
a bit less~ the unkempt sight.

The best of me has long been 
my dabbling in art and altruism;
Ila and I, two of a kind in these
respects – likeness ending there
for she has always been the Fashion
Plate, while unkind neighbors 
have often whispered, why on earth
did she choose such a common 
looking mate?!

Poetry is a religion I think, 
priest and priestess of words: 
like the tunnels of worms and 
the wings of birds our spans
high and low, depending on
the inspiration, composing both
gems and turds.

Though my body has 
slowed – the downward inclining
normal senior trend – my spirit 
seems yet, most times, to be rising, 
though audibly creaking its upward
arching positive bend; myself long of the 
opinion that the sun is a bit more concentrated 
when in an old poet's/poetess's experienced 
capable hands, expressed in his/hers well seasoned 
perhaps overly cured, highly distilled flatulent 
eyes, with just minor joint-less joint-sighs, 
I dutifully pen heartfelt lights –  
writing new, lustrous dawns over all
my frequented restroom, therefore only
somewhat restful golden nights
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Eagle Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 2:15 PM
A well written poem. Interesting and engaging.
DiMino Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, Elena; hope there is something of value to others in this work. I write, and can only hope that I am making new tracks and not just spinning my wheels in deeper.
Eslinger Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 7:57 PM
Joe, well except for the beard, and the bald, & substitute husband for wife in words. I completely relate, wondering if the i of the portrayed You weren’t Me? GreTly, greatly enjoyed this piece! Nice weekend! sally
DiMino Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Sally; this was fun to write. So pleased you could relate and have a chuckle. Sally, you have not left my prayers. Blessings my friend.
George Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Hi Joe,this self portrait of yours, I enjoyed much. You with your scanty hair unkempt and a wife so fashionable would definitely make an interesting combination...... :) But is there anything really substantial in external appearance ? Your dabbling in art and altruism is enough to keep you at a high pedestal. So rejoice, man! Your poem has given me a real chuckle :)
DiMino Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa, you are too kind. You made my day. Blessings.
Romios Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 3:53 AM
A wonderful portrait of you and the Princess. Savoring the spirit of life and poetry. Don’t worry about the hair, it’s not you, it’s just genetics))) there are many men with full heads of hair, some moral scoundrels. Charles Manson was one! You are not your body. NOR is anyone . else. You are spirit …more than anything else. anything.else! I got a bang out of your description of you and the restroom. Done peretically well! Christmas wishes Pangie
DiMino Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Hi Pangie; happy you got a giggle out of this one. Not too concerned about the hair, certain that where ever it went, it is serving a higher and lower purpose: like strands of a bird's nest, or carpeting for those nasty red aunts, who bite me for its poor quality. Blessings my friend. This year will be another happy, for reasonably healthy, Christmas. But getting a couple teeth extracted next week, hoping I am able to sing over the holidays. The "Our Father" is my favorite on Christmas day~ every day of the year really. Blessings.
Volumes Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 1:40 AM
Joe, I think instead of "Me" you could have called it "All of us who are aging" Well written and I can certainly relate. I super Love 'though audibly creaking its upward arching positive bend;' You are both Lucky to have each other. Cheers
DiMino Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Age dissolves many of our imagined differences...and brings us closer to God. Oh those aches, I know! Not one to cry...but, I have let out more than a few expletives on occasion. Believing in a natural diet, really don't even use aspirins, I find a shot of gin and a beer work wonders -- in moderation of course. Blessings my friend.
Rose  Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 3:46 PM
ah, this made me smile Joe we grow old but our lanterns burn bright when it comes to poetry, such a delight to read, thankyou.
DiMino Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Hi Rose; so pleased you also find it this way. When I write, past, now and future dimension are all one big glob of shining ever-accessible moment, for me to sought through and enjoy.
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:46 PM
A delightful treatment of a sage subject, Joe. ~;o)
DiMino Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Thank you, Arlo; this was a lot of fun to write. My wife got a big chuckle while reading it~ "Yep!" She smiled.
Hankins Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 9:19 AM
I really enjoyed this, Joe, for it reminded me so much of myself. One exception: I still have a full head of hair! Nice imagery throughout.
DiMino Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Then what would I write about, all my long, rambling excursions distilled to clipped, rather predictable, cleanly appearing works?~ lacking my well used, scars and tarnishing. I would miss the winging-it mayhem. Thank you, Milt. I really am grateful for your visits and fine participation. As you can see, I like commenting as much as writing and posting new works. Blessings my friend.
Hankins Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 3:01 PM
Thanks, Joe. Ask for a trimmer for Christmas!
DiMino Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:28 AM
HI Milt, thank you; I have not been so blessed...but I dare not ask for some~ every-time I do, more comes out of my nose, ears, and...well, everyplace I really don't want any. So, let's just say, hair is not on my Christmas list. Have a great day my friend!
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