Maze

Stress sizzles at the bottom of my brain Twisting cyclones lashing tongue-tied migraines Bubbles trapped by broken, acidic air Garden of corrosive roses' despair Dark swords piercing aura's fragility Turning sunlight into adversity Until angels of amnesty bypass Sinuous paths; breaking a wall of glass Into a puzzle, relinquished by the steam Of a sage maze, lost within a downy dream. 6/27/20 For 'Maze - 10 Word Challenge' contest Sponsor: A Dear Heart Required words: garden, maze, paths, sinuous, turning, trapped, puzzle, twisting, lost, wall.

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John Watt

Date: 7/1/2020 11:28:00 PM

Back to wish you my congrats on your wonderful maze poem. Well done!

Constance La France

Date: 7/1/2020 3:41:00 PM

Michelle, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem _Constance

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/1/2020 2:36:00 PM

Powerful expression of life's journey through the metaphors of maze. Love how it starts with anxieties, pain and ends with a little hopeful note. Congratulations on your win Michelle. Blessings and love :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/1/2020 12:52:00 AM

lost within a downy dream.. Beautifully crafted.. Great win Michelle.. Congrats..

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/29/2020 1:03:00 PM

wow, this is powerful and very well crafted, I am sure it will land on the winner's list... great write Michelle! hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/28/2020 1:34:00 AM

You used the allocated words to perfection Michelle, good luck in the contest. Tom

John Watt

Date: 6/27/2020 5:21:00 PM

Michelle, this poem traverses some dark paths of pain (migraines), sadness (corrosive roses' despair), maybe even depression (dark swords piercing). It seems to come to a more hope filled end as angels of amnesty arrive and the oppression dissolves at the end of a dream. Some wonderful, concise writing, and making the 10 words flow naturally as the tale unfolds. Awesome poetry, I expect this will do very well ~ John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/27/2020 5:05:00 PM

A magical maze of words that drew me in from the start. This is so expressive of the times we are in presently. You use the words wonderfully Michelle. This should fair very well! Blessings xxoo

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2020 4:50:00 PM

You took me down a beautiful maze, I love getting lost in your poem dear Michelle. Winning wishes, signed sealed and delivered to your heart xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2020 4:46:00 PM

You used the words very eloquently, Michelle. Well done!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/27/2020 4:22:00 PM

Well done, Michelle! Your words describe the suffering perfectly. I suffer from chronic migraines and have some symptoms even on good days. Botox helped for a long time but is no longer as effective. I hope you are able to get relief from treatment better than I am. GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/27/2020 1:38:00 PM

Words blend seamlessly in your theme, Michelle--wonderfully done with lines like: ..Twisting cyclones lashing tongue-tied migraines..

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/27/2020 1:29:00 PM

Best let the sage clear the air! Well said! Aloha! Rico

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2020 12:38:00 PM

That's about the size and shape of it; well penned.