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Mayflower Voyage

-On September the sixteen, sixteen-hundred and twenty
 The Mayflower set sail for the land of milk and honey
 To the land called Virginia, on a map they were shown
 The Pilgrims will leave England and travel to the unknown

 The Pilgrims seek to work and raise their families freely 
 To live by Gods law in truth and believes was ideally
 Their faith is strong, their spirits on fire
 They hungered for freedom, to worship God, their desire

 Aboard the Mayflower was a hundred and two
 That didn't include the captain and crew
 The owner and captain was Christopher Jones
 And a crew of 30, their fate?...was unknown

 The Pilgrims, would embark on a 66-day quest
 Conditions were horrible, their bodies in distress
 In a stench filled dungeon, one deck down below
 Heard the Saints singing praise to God - their faith would only grow

 Reaching Virginia was uncertain as the winter winds blew
 Circling back to Cape Cod was a safe thing to do 
 On November the twenty first, Sixteen-hundred and twenty
 The Mayflower reached America, the land of Milk and Honey




                                    11/3/2021
                        A Noteworthy Ship Poetry Contest
                        Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
                                 October 17, 2021
                            ~ Honorable Mention ~
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Deo Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Nice to re-read beyond the long weekend of Thanksgiving. Shalom shalom in Jesus
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Anil, I'm glad enjoyed it, Blessings Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:46 PM
I enjoy the way you write. Love the history and faith!
Brown Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Your words are to kind ~ Debra
George Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 7:41 PM
A historical incident is beautifully given life and blood once more through your narration. Spot on for the occasion of Thanksgiving, Debra ....
Brown Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Thanks Valsa, you are so sweet to comment. Fall is my favorite season of the year. Blessings ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:50 PM
Beautiful and true; "Virginia became New England, because of storms of Providence." America is blessed. Happy Thanksgiving Debra. shalom shalom
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Happy Thanksgiving! Anil, Thank you! for the comment. Many Blessing ~ Debbie
Kaufman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 2:44 PM
enjoyed this well composed and timely piece. You're reference to the pilgrims voyage, their hardships, and devout faith are a perfect reminder to all of us as we approach the Thanksgiving season.
Brown Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Nancy, Thank you for a pleasant comment. I'm happy you enjoy this poem. May you have a Blessed, Thanksgiving ~Debbie
Liguori Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Wonderstruck I am at reading this poetic piece about the Mayflower. 'Their faith is strong, their spirit on fire'... you tell the story well. Thank you for creating and sharing this wonderful poem.
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy the poem and Thank for the kind words. Have a Blessed night ~ Debra
Jayasankar Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 12:29 AM
Wow Debra, enjoyed reading this historical piece...the Mayflower's Journey...Hugs...~ Ani
Brown Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 1:16 PM
I was happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank You for taking the time to comment. Many Blessings ~ Debbie
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 3:58 PM
I recall the history and how I believe half of them died enroute to America. Or at least half were dead by end of winter. So it ended up being a pretty small crowd at the first Thanksgiving!!
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Hi! Andrea, Yes, sadly half of the passengers died, because of a hash winter. One died on the Ship to America, a young man by the name of William Button. There were a total of 53 Pilgrims out of 102 passengers left at the First Thanksgiving, 22 men and 4 women. Blessing ~ Debbie
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November 9, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Superb historical piece Debra, with real insightful imagery and great rhyme too. I really enjoyed this as I'm reading a book about the Mayflowers amazing journey.Blessings,Gordon in Scotland.
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Yours words are very kind, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. The Mayflower was an courageous journey that's for sure. I can't image going though that hurricane. The people were crammed in the passenger quarters as is. Then have all that water pouring down on them, from the ships deck.. "Terrifying"..... Thank You, Gordon for taking time to comment. Enjoy the Book on The Mayflower ~Debra
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November 8, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Wow Debra, what a wonderful history lesson you have created! I am very impressed by your knowledge and your skillful poetry. Blessings, Paulette
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Hi Paulette, I enjoy reading about the history of this country.... Thank You taking the time to comment ~ Debbie
Goff Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Gorgeous historical rhyme, Debra!
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thank You, James for your kind word. Blessings ~ Debbie
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Rather a miracle, this voyage, as comes through so well in your poem... Next in the 'series:' The Pilgrims' first Thanksgiving... ~ April Showers, Owner of May Flowers Moving Company
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Hi Gershon, I'm surprise myself they did make to America. They went though a Hurricane, tropical storms. The main Mask cracked on the ship, It leaked, sea sickness. The passengers quarters was 80 x 20 with 5ft high ceilings. Only one person died. It was a miracle for sure Thanks G~ It's always nice talking to you, ~ Debbie
Baker Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 1:42 PM
I enjoy reading your poem of faith and courage. Hearts for God were the seeds of America's beginning. Praise God. Well written and good rhyming Debra. Bill
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Thank You Bill, I love history and to read about the faith these people had and the love for God, was a blessing. Thank you, for your words of encouragement. God Bless ~ Debbie
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 11:03 AM
And what a mess they made of things! (4 of my ancestors were aboard).
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Hi! Rico, What a blessing to have discovered you have 4 ancestors aboard the Mayflower. Your Genealogy must be very interesting. Blessings ~ Debbie
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