Maybe It Was Destiny

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While the heat of hope sparks the sight. Nudge the dawn of a fresh, bright day. Moon still stinks from the house of light. Thus, the star's hearts should fade away. Just focus on the flames and pray. For the brave to face the grim night. Lord will sure toss a glance our way. While the heat of hope sparks the sight. Sing with strength a song of delight. Maybe that's how you'll leaf your say. We'll laugh, whimper, and rarely fight. Nudge the dawn of a fresh, bright day. We wish we could bow down and sway. My soul can be shaped smooth, by blight. Let blooms reflect their scented spray. Moon still stinks from the house of light. My soul swaths charms in their foresight. I couldn't be most thrilled with that ray. Daunting I weigh the sparrow flight. Thus, the star's hearts should fade away. Lift worn knees, grab a breath, and stay? Our souls are not spurned to their plight. If from my swarming hands, you stray. My Heart limps with weight gain tonight. While the heat of hope. Checked by HMS.COM: 8 syllables per line, and the last line: 5 syllables Written: March 09, 2023 Double The Fun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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