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May the Force Be With You

I like to write on the screened-in porch By the light of the grinning tiki torch Listening to nature's sounds Ideas sound abound Ignited by the creative force Received an Honorable Mention in "Inspired"contest

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/30/2011 7:42:00 AM

Funny one....me and my 12 year old son say that line alot and many version of it. We like may the forks be with you and a spoon too......use the force!! etc great thoughts for the contest and congrats on the hm!!

Joshua Lacey

Date: 6/29/2011 2:38:00 PM

let the poems begin! lol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 12:28:00 PM

grand words of rhyme in this Limerick Susan.. luv the title .. I am a Star Wars freak .. and luv the tiki torch.. awesome piece.. a super win for u luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 3:10:00 AM

Susan, one of the best entries I've seen for this contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2011 4:54:00 PM

Congrats...Sara

Anusheel Pandey

Date: 6/27/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel

Anusheel Pandey

Date: 6/27/2011 3:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 11:34:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 6:19:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Susan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 8:43:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your HM in Inspired.. an impressive and unique write luv..enjoy honor..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/25/2011 3:42:00 AM

I sure enjoyed that line with the grinning tiki torch :D -- what a cool place to be inspired :) Wish you the best in the contest Susan :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/24/2011 2:07:00 PM

Lovely descriptive piece, Susan. I can imagine being there. My birthday's May 4th and the kids at school used to think it was hilarious 'May the Fourth be with you.'

James Fraser

Date: 6/24/2011 12:20:00 PM

Inspired is the word Susan. Listening to natures sounds sure does invite inspiration. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :)

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/24/2011 2:33:00 AM

Vivid and creative with a fun feel to it. Good luck in the contest! Love, Robert.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 9:30:00 PM

Nicely done, Susan!! Love that grinning tiki torch touch!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2011 4:57:00 PM

Reads like winniing material to me..Good luck in the contest..Very creative place to write..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2011 11:36:00 AM

yes, you yield a great creative force here, susan! winning wishes to you.. i likey lots..:) huggs, nette