Black Eyed Susan Poet Limerick

May the Force Be With You

I like to write on the screened-in porch
By the light of the grinning tiki torch
Listening to nature's sounds
Ideas sound abound
Ignited by the creative force


Received an Honorable Mention in "Inspired"contest

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Doris Culverhouse June 30, 2011 at 7:42 AM Funny one....me and my 12 year old son say that line alot and many version of it. We like may the forks be with you and a spoon too......use the force!! etc great thoughts for the contest and congrats on the hm!!

Joshua Lacey June 29, 2011 at 2:38 PM let the poems begin! lol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 28, 2011 at 12:28 PM grand words of rhyme in this Limerick Susan.. luv the title .. I am a Star Wars freak .. and luv the tiki torch.. awesome piece.. a super win for u luv..

Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2011 at 3:10 AM Susan, one of the best entries I've seen for this contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2011 at 4:54 PM Congrats...Sara

Anusheel Pandey June 27, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel

Anusheel Pandey June 27, 2011 at 3:13 PM Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 12:28 PM Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey June 27, 2011 at 11:34 AM Congratulations Susan on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta June 27, 2011 at 6:19 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Susan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 26, 2011 at 8:43 PM Congrats Susan on your HM in Inspired.. an impressive and unique write luv..enjoy honor..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 25, 2011 at 3:42 AM I sure enjoyed that line with the grinning tiki torch :D -- what a cool place to be inspired :) Wish you the best in the contest Susan :)

Jack Horne June 24, 2011 at 2:07 PM Lovely descriptive piece, Susan. I can imagine being there. My birthday's May 4th and the kids at school used to think it was hilarious 'May the Fourth be with you.'

James Fraser June 24, 2011 at 12:20 PM Inspired is the word Susan. Listening to natures sounds sure does invite inspiration. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :)

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 24, 2011 at 2:33 AM Vivid and creative with a fun feel to it. Good luck in the contest! Love, Robert.

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2011 at 9:30 PM Nicely done, Susan!! Love that grinning tiki torch touch!

Sara Kendrick June 23, 2011 at 4:57 PM Reads like winniing material to me..Good luck in the contest..Very creative place to write..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud June 23, 2011 at 11:36 AM yes, you yield a great creative force here, susan! winning wishes to you.. i likey lots..:) huggs, nette