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May the Force Be With You

I like to write on the screened-in porch
By the light of the grinning tiki torch
Listening to nature's sounds
Ideas sound abound
Ignited by the creative force


Received an Honorable Mention in "Inspired"contest

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/30/2011 7:42:00 AM Funny one....me and my 12 year old son say that line alot and many version of it. We like may the forks be with you and a spoon too......use the force!! etc great thoughts for the contest and congrats on the hm!! Login to Reply

Joshua Lacey Date: 6/29/2011 2:38:00 PM let the poems begin! lol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/28/2011 12:28:00 PM grand words of rhyme in this Limerick Susan.. luv the title .. I am a Star Wars freak .. and luv the tiki torch.. awesome piece.. a super win for u luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/28/2011 3:10:00 AM Susan, one of the best entries I've seen for this contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/27/2011 4:54:00 PM Congrats...Sara Login to Reply

Anusheel Pandey Date: 6/27/2011 3:14:00 PM Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel Login to Reply

Anusheel Pandey Date: 6/27/2011 3:13:00 PM Congrats on your win..May the Force continue to be with you.. Love Anusheel Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/27/2011 12:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 6/27/2011 11:34:00 AM Congratulations Susan on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/27/2011 6:19:00 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Susan Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/26/2011 8:43:00 PM Congrats Susan on your HM in Inspired.. an impressive and unique write luv..enjoy honor.. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/25/2011 3:42:00 AM I sure enjoyed that line with the grinning tiki torch :D -- what a cool place to be inspired :) Wish you the best in the contest Susan :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/24/2011 2:07:00 PM Lovely descriptive piece, Susan. I can imagine being there. My birthday's May 4th and the kids at school used to think it was hilarious 'May the Fourth be with you.' Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 6/24/2011 12:20:00 PM Inspired is the word Susan. Listening to natures sounds sure does invite inspiration. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :) Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 6/24/2011 2:33:00 AM Vivid and creative with a fun feel to it. Good luck in the contest! Love, Robert. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/23/2011 9:30:00 PM Nicely done, Susan!! Love that grinning tiki torch touch! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/23/2011 4:57:00 PM Reads like winniing material to me..Good luck in the contest..Very creative place to write..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/23/2011 11:36:00 AM yes, you yield a great creative force here, susan! winning wishes to you.. i likey lots..:) huggs, nette Login to Reply