May Surprise

Who remembers, is it only me?
Flour paste, scissors and pretty colored paper
Assembled upon the table, the early morn in May
This memory shrugs so many years away
Our innocence, cut and shaped
Into bright-sprigged paper cones
Such sweet accomplishments, each our own
Then quickly running out the door
To pick spring beauties, violets galore
Or lady slippers, wildwood fern, we gathered them
Sweet Williams, heavy on their stems 
And fresh as morning dew, filled with bloom
The paper cones were flower filled
And paper handles dried, smells of sweet perfume
Then down the dusty road we trudged
Arms loaded side by side
No greater pleasure as a child
The thought of bringing someone smiles
Then knocking on each neighbor's door
And calling "May basket...Surprise!"
Our little legs then running quickly, down the road, 
Behind a tree, we would hide
And watch them find this flower prize
Must not....get caught.....must not get caught!
And we were taught
That bringing light to someone's eyes
Was worth a lot !!
Under May Day's vibrant skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 28, 2009 at 3:18 PM
OMG I thought I was the only one who lamented th loss of this wonderful May ritual! Wonderful Memories Carrie! Thank you! And thank you for your comments on my tribute poem also! ~Trudy~
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April 27, 2009 at 7:33 PM
I had forgot, that is what is so unique about this site, it's a place to come and revive old memories. I could almost picture you breaking and running. made a smile, thanks! God Bless. Ron
Shango Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Carrie, I am ever spellbound by your way with words, you romance the soul out of them, and let morph like light. Powerful.
Strand Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful nostalgia Carrie another for your anthology of this genre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Ginn Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Hmmm I just can't bring this one up. I remember talking about May Day and May Pole so maybe I did and can't remember it. I can just see your smiles though...can I get extra credit for that
Anderson Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 2:06 AM
wonderful write. brighten my day, you did
Bird Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 9:03 PM
This is a very sweet childhood memory, to make something grand out of construction paper, scissors, and glue, was so much fun in school. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work, always appreciated.
Gorelick Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:14 PM
I remember..once my brother and I picked flowers from our neighbors garden and put them in her basket. Shame on us! BG
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April 26, 2009 at 6:11 PM
this is fun! fun! fun! Carrie!what a delightful 'frame-of-mind to write such sweet beauty! Jim
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April 26, 2009 at 5:52 PM
That's a sweet deed, poem indeed. I'm sure there were a lot of happy people in your neighbor hood. Thank you for the images that your poem brought to mind. I can almost hear the children runnig off giggling and soft-squeeling with delight after they left their May surprise. And, thank you for your comments on my poetry. Always, Dane
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April 26, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Love this my Carrie...as usaual you bring me into your poem and let me enjoy your love for the words that flow so well. You are a gift my friend..thanks for always taking the time to read my work...i look forward to it.
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April 26, 2009 at 1:43 PM
You are not the only one "Who remembers" making the baskets and filling them with flowers. Lovely images of tender, young hearts at play, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
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