Mating Season

Winter's exit saw a smile on my green tree
Tiny leaves budding on barren branches
Where a sparrow posed in white cheeks
Donning on gray neck a broad black bib,

The sparrow did speak with its tiny beak
A song of chirps sounding romantic lyrics
Facing a purple tree's flowery boutique
Where a female danced to chirpy music,

Female being adorned in brownish attire
Looked to the male in glimpses and glare
Showing of its tree's purple white blooms
Flapping wings to fly, but going nowhere.

Putting on charm, male bounced around
Circling the female, displaying warmth
When suddenly they flew, as if by a plan
Chatter they beheld, hard to understand.

Blooming resolutely, green tree swings
Crowning white blossoms on tiny twigs
On branches that host a tidy grassy nest
Inside of which rest grayish white eggs.

May 7, 2018
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George Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 4:37 AM
What all interesting scenes you bring before our eyes ! The fore play of birds before mating is a lovely sight... so very interesting to watch. Here the he sparrow with a black bib around his neck and the she sparrow in brownish attire make a lovely pair and finally the fruition of their love as tiny eggs in a nest! So sweet!
Raven Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Hi Vijay, a beautifully composed piece of flowing poetry. You do paint such wonderful pictures with your beautiful flowing words. So skillfully your words hold us within the heart of your thought. What a wonderful canvas you do share. May your pen ever run gold. Your friend always....Mike.
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 7:08 AM
In all innocence, how romantically they share their joy. I tend to agree with Harry, if only us humans could be as uncomplicated. A great write from your gifted pen Vijay.....Maria hugs
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Many thanks Maria for your kind feedback.
Murray Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 11:45 AM
How romantic.
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Jean.
Sathasivam Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Excellent and beautifully written, the gift of our Mother Nature . Enjoyed reading it.
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Ravi.
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:12 PM
excited to read your next poem, vijay..huggs
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thank you nette.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:02 AM
A wow for your profound and wild imagination! "Mating Season", mating species, mating human souls.. In the den of mother nature! So wonderfully and sweetly depicted in your amazing write. A great pleasure to read your piece of work! Stay blessed dear Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:25 AM
You are so kind Besma..many thanks for your delightful feedback.
Pett Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Beautifully written poem Vijay, the sound of the morning chorus is such a pleasure to hear and your poem a pleasure to read.
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Happy to read your feedback Roy..many thanks.
Warrior Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Great depiction Vijay...nicely done my friend...love and light...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thank you WW.
Horsman Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:45 AM
If only the human-race could follow the example of our wonderful birds. love your poem, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:43 AM
So true--thank you Harry.
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:03 PM
The birds are sure are all out , but beautiful and musical .. great imagery and enjoyed reading Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:40 PM
what a sweetly painted love nest scene this is Vijay. Very creative.
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Excellent, Vijay--superbly descriptive and beautiful. Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Happy to read your comments Janice..many thanks.
Sands Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:39 PM
This is excellent Vijay with such detail! I enjoyed this today :) Well done.
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Always happy to read your feedback..many thanks Heidi.
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 11:03 AM
vivid picture of a season's fertile mood...you charm me so, vijay.. huggs
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate your kind words.
Gentile Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Such a beautiful expression of nature's wonder. just a lovely read, Vijay !!!
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Many thanks Mike ..always happy to read your comments.
Michael Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:14 AM
They didn't waste any time...Love the imagery of this love story...All the best
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:14 PM
You are right Arturo, but it's the season and time is short..many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Wow..;Beautifully written, the gift of our Mother Nature.There is a nest of the red vented bulbul bird( with two brown eggs) in our garden. Lovely poetry....
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Enkoyed reading your comments..many thanks Supraja.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Spring's choreography of life as produced by nature following God's design! Glorious poem my friend, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Thank you my friend..always value your feedback.
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