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Mating Season

Winter's exit saw a smile on my green tree Tiny leaves budding on barren branches Where a sparrow posed in white cheeks Donning on gray neck a broad black bib, The sparrow did speak with its tiny beak A song of chirps sounding romantic lyrics Facing a purple tree's flowery boutique Where a female danced to chirpy music, Female being adorned in brownish attire Looked to the male in glimpses and glare Showing of its tree's purple white blooms Flapping wings to fly, but going nowhere. Putting on charm, male bounced around Circling the female, displaying warmth When suddenly they flew, as if by a plan Chatter they beheld, hard to understand. Blooming resolutely, green tree swings Crowning white blossoms on tiny twigs On branches that host a tidy grassy nest Inside of which rest grayish white eggs. May 7, 2018

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Date: 2/19/2022 4:37:00 AM
What all interesting scenes you bring before our eyes ! The fore play of birds before mating is a lovely sight... so very interesting to watch. Here the he sparrow with a black bib around his neck and the she sparrow in brownish attire make a lovely pair and finally the fruition of their love as tiny eggs in a nest! So sweet!
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Date: 11/7/2018 6:27:00 PM
Hi Vijay, a beautifully composed piece of flowing poetry. You do paint such wonderful pictures with your beautiful flowing words. So skillfully your words hold us within the heart of your thought. What a wonderful canvas you do share. May your pen ever run gold. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 5/11/2018 7:08:00 AM
In all innocence, how romantically they share their joy. I tend to agree with Harry, if only us humans could be as uncomplicated. A great write from your gifted pen Vijay.....Maria hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 6:28:00 AM
Many thanks Maria for your kind feedback.
Date: 5/9/2018 11:45:00 AM
How romantic.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Jean.
Date: 5/9/2018 6:10:00 AM
Excellent and beautifully written, the gift of our Mother Nature . Enjoyed reading it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/9/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Ravi.
Date: 5/8/2018 8:12:00 PM
excited to read your next poem, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/9/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thank you nette.
Date: 5/8/2018 11:02:00 AM
A wow for your profound and wild imagination! "Mating Season", mating species, mating human souls.. In the den of mother nature! So wonderfully and sweetly depicted in your amazing write. A great pleasure to read your piece of work! Stay blessed dear Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 11:25:00 AM
You are so kind Besma..many thanks for your delightful feedback.
Date: 5/8/2018 10:41:00 AM
Beautifully written poem Vijay, the sound of the morning chorus is such a pleasure to hear and your poem a pleasure to read.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 11:25:00 AM
Happy to read your feedback Roy..many thanks.
Date: 5/8/2018 8:52:00 AM
Great depiction Vijay...nicely done my friend...love and light...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you WW.
Date: 5/8/2018 4:45:00 AM
If only the human-race could follow the example of our wonderful birds. love your poem, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 7:43:00 AM
So true--thank you Harry.
Date: 5/7/2018 9:03:00 PM
The birds are sure are all out , but beautiful and musical .. great imagery and enjoyed reading Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 5/7/2018 5:40:00 PM
what a sweetly painted love nest scene this is Vijay. Very creative.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 5/7/2018 1:02:00 PM
Excellent, Vijay--superbly descriptive and beautiful. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:17:00 PM
Happy to read your comments Janice..many thanks.
Date: 5/7/2018 12:39:00 PM
This is excellent Vijay with such detail! I enjoyed this today :) Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:16:00 PM
Always happy to read your feedback..many thanks Heidi.
Date: 5/7/2018 11:03:00 AM
vivid picture of a season's fertile mood...you charm me so, vijay.. huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:16:00 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 5/7/2018 9:31:00 AM
Such a beautiful expression of nature's wonder. just a lovely read, Vijay !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:15:00 PM
Many thanks Mike ..always happy to read your comments.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:14:00 AM
They didn't waste any time...Love the imagery of this love story...All the best
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:14:00 PM
You are right Arturo, but it's the season and time is short..many thanks.
Date: 5/7/2018 7:56:00 AM
Wow..;Beautifully written, the gift of our Mother Nature.There is a nest of the red vented bulbul bird( with two brown eggs) in our garden. Lovely poetry....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:13:00 PM
Enkoyed reading your comments..many thanks Supraja.
Date: 5/7/2018 6:21:00 AM
Spring's choreography of life as produced by nature following God's design! Glorious poem my friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thank you my friend..always value your feedback.

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