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Mathematics Pleiades

Mathematics Pleiades mounting death toll shows mad math of politics, when masks worn the numbers hold-- mask-less, the numbers rise many just won't comply mortality madness maybe we'll save ourselves Written Oct. 4, 2020 for Pleiades Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 10/16/2020 10:19:00 PM

Great poem for our time!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/16/2020 10:28:00 PM

Thanks, Jennifer. Gob bless and stay safe.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/12/2020 9:01:00 PM

Most unusual approach and I welcome it in my reading the Math pleiades(es). What is the plural of pleiades, anyway? Congratulations on your win, Carol, an enjoyable read and so current.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2020 6:44:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/12/2020 6:57:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, and a virtual hug for you, too!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2020 4:09:00 AM

All wrapped-up, mask covers my mouth in muffled response, but I’ll shout anyway....Congratulations, Carol!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/12/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim. I really like the Pleiades form. I've even written some seven syllable Pleiades.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2020 12:53:00 PM

Carol. I like your creativity with this one. But gotta disagree. Herd immunity is what we need. That's just what I happen to believe. I wear mask when mandated, but in the end, it's all about being healthy, getting one's immune system up and not letting media's constant babble stress people out. Congrats on the win.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2020 3:08:00 PM

oh what a clever take on the maths theme, a poem we can all relate to, good luck in the contest:-)

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/5/2020 3:12:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, and stay safe.