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Masters and Shadows

I see them gathering late at night under streetlights, shadows dancing in the wind or on still nights, frozen into patches pasted on asphalt. There too on hot summer days, shadows harsh edged and dark under trees, an oasis of cool in a desert of heat. Masters hog the light whilst shadows are prisoners held captive within a shape, obedient to whatever movement their masters make. For them there is no freedom to jump beyond the dimensional constraints that hold them tight. They only brush the surface of things. We too act as either shadows or masters blind to the fact that we are neither, but part of the light.

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Date: 5/17/2023 10:12:00 AM
I shall FAVE this.....and if it don't become POTD....I shall sent the shadows in.....beautifully written Paul. I give it a True Bostonians WICKED AWESOME!!! rating
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/17/2023 7:57:00 PM
Such praise...I blush ,John...seriously valued and appreciated especially the Bostonian rating. I live in Melbourne, often called the Boston of Australia...though I think Melb. Is considerably bigger unfortunately. Regards
Date: 5/17/2023 8:10:00 AM
You've certainly given me reason to reevaluate the weakness of shadows. Most often, people think of them as something to fear: ie... a dark shadowy place. In reality, as you depict them, they are our slaves, made to contort, to dance, to disappear if we simply turn off a light.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/17/2023 7:50:00 PM
I guess it comes down to perspectives...poor shadows always get the minor role. Indeed apreciate your coments Lin...thankyou
Date: 5/17/2023 6:29:00 AM
Ashbery's self-portrait in a convex mirror half hour listen I did has clearly burned into my brain - as I'm leaping onto the word surface in this poem and thinking about it in a more profound way (in the lightest sense of the word profound I'm sure - I'm relatively new to this level of inquisition of words of that particular nature). So much to think about with the shadows, master or light line - I find them all incomprehensibly abstract. I like this one, makes ideas dance in the mind
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/17/2023 7:48:00 PM
You need a medal for the Ashbery marathon...though Portrait is a masterpiece. Thanks for yr positive coments DD...as always, valued.

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