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Marshmallow Sky

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While out walking this morning, I looked up at the vast Texas sky

filled with marshamallow clouds. I came home and wrote this Haiku. Enjoy

fluffy clouds on high heavenly shapes and sizes a marshmallow sky

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/28/2023 4:10:00 AM

Oh wow, I'm loving these marshmallow skies, with heavenly shapes and creamy textures.. Beautifully written dear Sara, this haiku is spellbinding~ sending love!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/28/2023 3:21:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Hiya. I appreciate your kind comments. I saw marshmallow skies this afternoon. May you have some in your part of the world. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/27/2023 8:04:00 PM

wonderful, I never thought of clouds this way, now it is obvious, thank you Sara, enjoyed the comment that i read from Karen have a nice day

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/28/2023 3:22:00 PM

thanks, Yann, for stopping by. I'd never thought of clouds that way either until I went out walking through our neighborhood and suddenly saw marshmallows in the sky. Hope you have a good evening, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 9/27/2023 5:27:00 PM

I bow to you oh Haiku Queen. This is amazing!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 5:37:00 PM

oh, my...Haiku Queen? I never imagined such a title. Thank you...glad you enjoyed my little creation. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/27/2023 4:58:00 PM

Tasty poetry, and well written, Sara. A poet friend, down the hall, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 5:38:00 PM

thanks for stopping by my in house poet friend and soulmate, hugs, me

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/27/2023 4:58:00 PM

May I taste the poetic sky you creared? Sounds great to me, Yummy Haiku. Pangie x

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 5:38:00 PM

Your comments made me smile...thank you...yes, take a bit of the marshmallow sky...it is yummy! Thanks for stopping by, my poet friend

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2023 12:33:00 PM

Once again a lovely arrangement of words creating vivid imagery.. you must have haikus for breakfast..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 1:52:00 PM

Your comment made me chuckle, Silent One. I hadn't thought about it, but perhaps I do eat haikus for breakfast--the breakfast of poets :-) smiles...thanks for stopping by.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2023 11:33:00 AM

Beautifully described, Sara: heavenly shapes and sizes a marshmallow sky---

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay, for stopping by and enjoying the beauty I created. Have a pleasant afternoon, Sara

Deb M

Date: 9/27/2023 9:13:00 AM

Perfect! Love this Sara…..Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Deb...may you have a pleasant evening, Sara