Marking Time

daylight hours Ozzie and Ben at the picnic table milkweeds dance across the board chess match underway all day, every day many stories shared, some repeated; neither cared till knights and pawns cast long shadows eyes straining, elders would bid farewell violet sunsets escorted them home one brisk morning, Ben waited for his friend hours on end, until the orb began to sink fading light from the spectral sunset usher of regret Ben sauntered past Ozzie's home black wreath on the door Ben cast chess pieces on the street no longer wanted to compete after that day, Ben’s zest for life faded away sun still journeyed across the sky but Ben rarely rose from bed twilight hours found him there, recounting the past tales he and Ozzie had told in his mind never grew old memories locked within his heart shadowed recollections of a fallen chess king
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June 21, 2011 at 1:27 AM
In the end game of life, death is the secon in far gone conclusions. As I do know, life only bares it's significance it you are lucky to witness it once again...... from the other side....take this observation in earnest! Keep the write-up, Up! Your friend in the Pen/G.FIELDS
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Creative work..Enjoyed ..Congrats...Sara
Locksley Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:45 PM
I think this should have ranked much higher but congratulations. Best to you, Diane
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Carolyn, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle, dear friend. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Many congratulations Carolyn on your win .....
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 3:45 AM
Many congrats Carolyn on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Johnson Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Very sad., Carolyn. But well done as usual, congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 4:45 AM
Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Carolyn. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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May 8, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Okay this one kinda did it to me for sure. It hit home. my best buddy over the years that I shared untold number of adventures with came down with Alzeimers recently and well ..it's just hard that's all for us both. A beautiful heart wrenching poem and i could feel it at least partially. It's a winner for me, Carolyn. Intp my favs . thanks
Ball Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 9:54 AM
The power of God is awesome as we both know, but, carol listen to me you have to help out here, think of the positive and your health will return, Faith is a great thing as we both know, so think positive, think that it's all in God's will what will happen, then think about He loves all His children, and believe me if you do that we will with our Lord conquer this to affirm our Power of the creator, oh by the way, the poem was good one as usual, God bless you Carol my friend.
Maverick Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 5:04 AM
A deeply sad piece here Carolyn with great emphathy i can see a winning place for this one. also some more soup mail!!
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May 7, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Beautiful poem Carolyn. Last stanza is my favourite.Thank you for your comments on 'Mom' poem. I know how you feel mother's day is always hard for me too . Hope you have a good day with your family . Anne
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May 7, 2011 at 3:40 PM
I think this is one of your best. I really like the line about shadowed recollections of a fallen chess king. Good luck in the contest and have a great weekend. Best to you, Diane
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May 7, 2011 at 10:37 AM
this is a great story for the contest good luck. john
Zzzzz Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:47 AM
A sad write, with allegorical connotations: we are all pieces on the chessboard of life, whether we be pawn or king. A good write.
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Very poignant write, very touchy and moving. How are you? Carolyn
Horne Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:01 AM
What a lovely, but sad poem, Carolyn - another winner, for sure : ) I've just made the finals of a short story comp (just 101 words) with a story about a funeral LOL. Jolly stuff, eh?
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:11 AM
how poignantly scribed, carols.... this shade of parting leaves me breathless! winning's best! :) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:42 AM
Very touching write Carolyn.Love it. Best wishes-kash
Neels Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 10:01 PM
An awesome write on true friendship, a touching write you have here Carolyn.. Love Wilma
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May 6, 2011 at 9:37 PM
So very well written, Carolyn, and the sorrow of losing a close friend is felt deeply and understood. Good luck in the contest. Take care! Love, Caroline.
Roberts Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 6:47 PM
what a touching story, best of luck in the contest Carolyn with this wonderful piece
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