Manu Pango

The trill under the morning star rings out a gusto and vivacious song. Oh! Sweet merle your irrepressible melody defies all that is logic, the chill piercing morning still only an infant, barely the time to receive the accolades of sunrise. Yet here lays the deepest frost a cold front that sleeps not driven upon a tempest, from the ice continent across the Southern Ocean, does not discourage you, your performance bequeath daily, a spirit of freedom, played out to an enkindle audience. Your act of unique tenderness, drifts along to all that would listen, a gift-wrapped sonata, in this, a night shift world. Each morning gently you succour nature from her temporal sleep, akin to the lone Bugler at his post your reveille to each brand-new day.
© Harry J Horsman 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/8/2022 9:10:00 PM
would love to hear this Sonata Harry... Exceptional write my friend. A favorite...
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Date: 7/5/2022 3:30:00 PM
Birdsong in the morning as the world is awakening is cheerful, wonderful and invigorating. A beautiful poem/sonato Harry… Belle
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Date: 7/5/2022 6:30:00 AM
Amazing imagery throughout and loved the use of wonderful vocabularies... Such a pleasure to read...
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Date: 7/5/2022 4:15:00 AM
Harry, your poem is a Sonata unto itself! Such beautiful thoughts are tempted by the inspiring images of dawn and its musical accompaniment ! Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 7/4/2022 6:23:00 PM
The magnificent Magpie! To mine faves Harry! Your lines are mind shakers! Love 'im!
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Date: 7/3/2022 9:12:00 PM
Such a delightful depiction of glorious day opening to song. Beautiful! Best wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 7/3/2022 4:48:00 AM
This is delightfully engaging! Love!
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Date: 7/2/2022 5:18:00 PM
i am one uv your "enkindled" audience memberz dear poet, az you remind me uv Jehovah God Almighty's awesome creative! I am a grand admirer uv the North American Male Cardinal...and when i'm feeling robust; i become anxious and vision the Snowy Owl...majestic! have a great Summer Harry...much love, james
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Date: 7/2/2022 7:44:00 AM
an amazing journey within these lines that ranks amongst the richest of aubade observations by poets....deftly executed is hardly enough to say
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:46:00 AM
"Your act of unique tenderness, drifts along to all that would listen, a gift-wrapped sonata, in this, a night shift world." Love it! Blackbirds, crows, magpies are very intelligent birds -- I have a little hummingbird that sits, not inches from my crushing hand, on the lip of the birdbath as it is filled each morning. Go figure. Friendly, but quite a sword he carries.
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Date: 7/1/2022 6:16:00 AM
This is high-caliber writing, Harry. You've done a beautiful job evoking the soft tune performed by this bird, which is responsible for waking up the world. You have a really good standard of writing, Harry.
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Date: 7/1/2022 2:54:00 AM
I don't think we have merles here ! How beautifully you have described the sweet sonata of this bird which awakens the world from its slumber in the twilight hours of the morning. A bird is indeed the spirit of freedom. Lovely penning, harry !
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Date: 6/29/2022 12:12:00 PM
Enjoyed the trill under morning star--a lovely song you wrote, Harry.
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Date: 6/29/2022 11:08:00 AM
Wow. Well written Harry! :)
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Date: 6/29/2022 8:46:00 AM
I am not an expert on birds, but your merle seems destined to give us a thrill. For which we thank.
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Date: 6/29/2022 8:08:00 AM
very, very nice, Harry.
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