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Written for "Mamma Poetry Contest," sponsored by Silent One and submitted 2/27/24

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My mother seems so far away from me on that beautiful white shore across the sea. Yet I remember love's soft glow upon her face and the feel of her touch and tender embrace. When I am weary from the burdens I've borne, and the path is unclear and I feel so forlorn, I remember her loving support was always near and her advice made the path ahead seem clear. When I feel there is no one who seems to care, or when the heartache seems too hard to bear, I remember how she always stood by my side and would tenderly wipe away the tears I cried. When there are moments of great joy and pride and I wish Mother was standing at my side, I remember she saw more than I thought I could be, and know I owe my triumphs to her belief in me. When I reminisce about the things she used to say and I miss her and think she is so far away, I remember what she gave lives on through me, and one day I'll see her on the white shore across the sea.

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Date: 3/11/2024 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/powerful/lovely Mother's Day ~ write/story/tribute about your mother. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 4:51:00 AM
thanks for your visit and for your encouraging and congratulatory words. Appreciate you. You, too, have a blessed day, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/10/2024 9:28:00 AM
A beautiful poem about your mum Sara.. It is a heartfelt tribute, which touches the heart and one many will relate to.. It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/10/2024 6:19:00 PM
thank you for your kind words about my poem...you're right...your topic was a great contest topic. I'm delighted with my placement; thanks for sponsoring the contest. Grateful for your support and your contribution to Poetry Soup. You're inspirational for the entire community. have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 2/28/2024 5:51:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your mother, Sara. A beautiful entry to the contest.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:54:00 PM
thank you, Jerry. You're most kind. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 2/28/2024 9:46:00 AM
Hi Sara , when I open the link and unveil one of your poems its like seeing mona lisa for the very first time Your heart and soul weaves so beautifully through your words , you are the Leonardo of poetry. All the best for the contest .
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:55:00 PM
oh, my! Your compliments made me blush a bit. I'm humbly grateful for them, especially 'the Leonardo of poetry.' You're so kind and thoughtful. Thank you! Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 6:24:00 PM
A wonderful mother, she surely was and still is, Sara. A lovely tribute to your mother, revealing the fine daughter you are. Good luck in the contest! Have a pleasant week, my love. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:12:00 AM
awww, your gracious words touched my heart this morning. I just wish Mother knew how deeply I cherished and respected her. Not sure I conveyed that enough. e-hugs for the day, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 3:17:00 PM
hertbreaking poem, Sara, i mean, i hope to see my mother that way, on the white shore across the sea, splendid image, you made me think of her, and almost cried, thanks poet
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:27:00 PM
awww, thank you, Yann, for your emotional response and words to my poem. I'm grateful it touched you. I believe you'll see your mom one day on the white shore across the sea. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 3:11:00 PM
What a moving tribute Sara. In the UK Mother's Day is approaching in March and it gets harder as the years go by. hugs Jan xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:28:00 PM
thank you, Jan, for your kind words. Mother's Day here is in May..my mother's been gone for 20 years and sometimes it's just hard. Sending you hugs for the evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 11:34:00 AM
Wonderful. A poem that says so much about a . mother. I like the nostalgic memories. Good luck with the contest.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:28:00 PM
thank you, Hilda. I appreciate your positive comments. have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 11:07:00 AM
Your words touched my heart. Really lovely.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:29:00 PM
thank you, Robert. I'm grateful my poem touched your heart--those are complimentary words for a poet. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 10:59:00 AM
i am assuming the shore is metaphor for death, but possibly she is still alive?
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:30:00 PM
you assumed correctly...the shore is a metaphor for death. My mother passed away 20 years ago. Wanted to write something special for her as well as for the contest.
Date: 2/27/2024 10:58:00 AM
She sounds amazing and I bet you will be thrilled to see her again. I feel that way about my brother who died when only 32 years old.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:31:00 PM
you're right. Mother was the quintessential mother and I hope to see her one day, although I feel she's with me constantly in spirit. I, too, lost my brother at a young age. Sending you hugs, Andrea....Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 10:35:00 AM
In this beautifully crafted poem, dear Sara you reflect on cherished memories and the profound love of a mother. The heartfelt words honor the selfless nature of a mother's love, evoking a sense of grace and nostalgia. It serves as a poignant reminder of the depth of our mothers' impact, highlighting the importance of expressing gratitude and appreciation while we still have the chance.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:37:00 PM
your comments are a delight to read, dear Sotto. I'm glad my words triggered grace and nostalgia. I so often wish I'd expressed my gratitude toward Mother more often than I did. She was a gem, a quintessential mother. Wishing you a wonderful evening, blessings, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 10:30:00 AM
Your poem reminded me of my Mom's love, affection, and protector of my life. Your tribute to Mom is heavenly and heartfelt. Nice one, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:36:00 PM
thanks, Jay. Perhaps our mothers were cut from the same cloth. I'm glad your found my poem heavenly and heartfelt. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 8:57:00 AM
Goosebump flesh as I read the bounty of loving memories of your Mamma… so near those of my own. Such sweet thoughts, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:35:00 PM
awww, your words are sweet, thoughtful and touching. Thank you! Appreciate you, Lin! enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 8:45:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Sara, although she is no longer with you she lives on in your heart and the fond memories you have of her. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:34:00 PM
thanks Tom, for your thoughtful comments. Yes, she lives on in my heart; I sometimes feel her spirit with me. I wanted to honor her with a poem about her for the contest. I think she'd be pleased :-) Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 8:10:00 AM
This is absolute magic, music, so beautiful. Yes - am surely faving this one. Love it so. God bless you, Sara. much love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:33:00 PM
thanks for your kind words...I'm grateful you found my poem magical and beautiful. Those words mean a great deal to me as does the fave--humbly grateful. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 2/27/2024 7:03:00 AM
Splendidly dwelling in beloved memories, Sara. So heartfelt is this poem, honoring mother's love! Graceful--delightful...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:32:00 PM
thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your kind words as I honored my mother with this poem for the contest. I'm glad you found my poem graceful and delightful...those words mean a lot to me!
Date: 2/27/2024 4:55:00 AM
A moving and emotional tribute to your mother echoing through the mind recalling memories of my own mother. Strange how we come to realise just how much more our mothers meant and how we overlooked so much in what was given selflessly. Such a poem gives voice to what we omitted to say when they were with with us. Just a beautiful piece dear Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:26:00 PM
thank you, Paul. You're right. It is strange that we come to realize much of what was given to us unselfishly and with love. I appreciate your visit and complimentary words. And thanks for 'following' me. I appreciate you doing so. Have a great evening, Sara

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