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Making the Taking Me To Your Leader Dialogue

Hey, greetings bro, how up is the joy you’re soaring? I hope that every little thing in you shines golden thru and within the space your spirit best dwells in. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Say, I did land as planned on the planet of hippies, goodwill, brotherhood and Father-Mother-God’s peace? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I did? Whoa, good, all good, your reply serves my ease. Oh, wow, sure I’d love to share your planet’s leaf and appreciate my first time without a hiding need! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wanna share that I’ve fallen in like with how you greet! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You’re right, I am undeniably and completely a mortal who seeks to weep no more for mankind’s quarrels which turn into ego, greed, power and/or fear hurdles that strengthen pain’s dysfunctional and endless circle. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It’s so cool that you know many other Earth ‘leavers.’ Do you know if any are spiritual truth believers fulfilling their desire to live as individuality seekers? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yeah? You just gave me a smile. I’m sure nature’s gleam here is more beautimous that any of us ever dreamed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks, man, I appreciate the offer. There’s one thing if its convenient for you to swing – would you guide me thru your paradise’s ether, you know, trek with me as walking here may be, to meet your helpful leader? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ See, I’ve a need. I can’t make the scene without blue, overall jeans that are ew-la-la comfy with pockets a plenty, feel what I mean? ... CayCay August 10, 2018

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Date: 8/24/2018 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/22/2018 8:06:00 AM
They do have marijuana on Mars!..Congrats on your win Cay Cay..
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Date: 8/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
"Groovy" take on this, a hippie from the sixties maybe? Landing on Planet Peace and blue jeans!
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Date: 8/12/2018 11:01:00 AM
Your creativity is a shinning star CayCay. Or is it a planet??? well done...
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Date: 8/12/2018 9:50:00 AM
Lol, CayCay. Your hippie side is showing or are you subtly suggesting a conspiracy theory, "Take me to your leader."
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Date: 8/11/2018 11:11:00 PM
Kewl...you "just gave me smile", CayCay. Poem clever. :D
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Date: 8/11/2018 5:34:00 PM
i am...grey...i wear...blue jeans... leafer...take me to your leader...
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