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Making the First Move

Together they strolled in ambling late night When it was quite dark and lonely outside And coyly he caught a glimpse of her sight Where her usual bright smile silently cried Loudly they argued, returning from walk Waking their daughter who heard the brawl And they went to bed, not finishing their talk Erecting a wall that made them feel small Morning took him to their daughter's school When he hugged her and kissed a goodbye Thinking about last night when he was a fool As he saw her subdued by a troubled sigh Skipping work then he headed back to house Making the first move, saying sorry he was And she hugged him back like a gifted spouse Enfolding him in embrace of an indulgent pause May 27, 2019 Dedicated to those who make the first move

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Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2022 3:15:00 AM

In a long standing relationship, there can be difference of opinion, arguments and brawls. But after such unpleasantness, if one takes the first move of reconciliation, the quarrel will end and life will begin anew with greater warmth and understanding . A beautiful poem inspiring couples to take the first move.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2019 8:38:00 AM

Wise words and thoughts. All can learn from this solution. Blessings Rick.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 6/5/2019 10:31:00 AM

Excuse me only getting to this one now, Vijay, all things poetry have been the furthest thing from my mind of late, so I've hardly been around. This is a very well expressed tribute... I always appreciate the capacity of the humble to be big people in the face of conflict... nice write, my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 3:11:00 PM

Hope all is well my friend--please take care of yourself. Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2019 3:31:00 PM

Someone's got to do it! Good thing he realized he needed to make a move.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/31/2019 6:56:00 AM

Much appreciate, MLK..many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2019 1:12:00 PM

Just think how high the divorce rate would be if no one made the first move to apologize after an argument. Perhaps the love he felt for his daughter made him realize how much was at stake. Well done, my friend! Enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2019 2:32:00 PM

So true and well put..much appreciate your visit and comments, Carolyn..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/30/2019 11:57:00 AM

I think it takes a very big person to be the first to apologize, Unfortunately so many don't have that knack, thank you for sharing, this meaningful poem Vij, Have a great day. xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2019 2:31:00 PM

Yes--it takes a lot humility..much appreciate, Pixie..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/30/2019 5:18:00 AM

There's a magic in the way you are weaving your story, dear Vijay! From line one to the very last, reading and savouring both the poetic flair and the deep message! A dedication of a highest quality and value that meets the nobility, humility and grandeur of souls who willingly make the first move! You always amaze with your work of art and insight.. definitely a FAV! Blessed always be with a mighty artistic pen.. my deepest regards.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2019 7:16:00 AM

I am always happy to read your comments and analysis..much appreciate the time you take to offer support to so many on Soup..many thanks, Besma. And a special thank you for the FAV.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/29/2019 9:59:00 PM

What a fine piece of poetry craftsmanship. And created with heart! It's easy to see all this happening, Blessings PR

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2019 7:14:00 AM

Much appreciate Panagiota..many thanks.

Wren Rushing

Date: 5/29/2019 9:22:00 PM

It takes a lot to make the first move, but usually is rewarded! Great write my dear poet!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2019 7:14:00 AM

Yes indeed..we certainly feel good..much appreciate Wren..many thanks.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/29/2019 2:25:00 PM

A truthful and sincere poem, Vijay. I recall scenes like that.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 3:02:00 PM

Yes--we all do. Much appreciate Ralph--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/29/2019 12:07:00 PM

Saying 'sorry" is such a humbling experience - it is quite normal for a couple to disagree but it is a mighty person who takes the first step! Vijay a real gem as always! Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 3:02:00 PM

So right you are..so hard to make that first move..much appreciate Jennifer..many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/29/2019 12:00:00 AM

Cheers to the one who makes the first move to a peaceful end of an argument. Brilliantly penned Vijay! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:50:00 AM

Yes indeed--so hard to make that first move. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Connie..many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2019 6:01:00 PM

such a sweet dedicatory poem. I love that last phrase "indulgent pause"

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:48:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea..many thanks.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2019 4:31:00 PM

You wrote an excellent poem, all the ingredients are there to kick in poetry adrenaline. The story is beautifully told with a message to hold ... and how wonderfully it did unfold! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:48:00 AM

You are so very kind..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, CayCay.

Silent One

Date: 5/28/2019 3:43:00 PM

I'm awful at making the first move...It's really hard for me.. however when I know I'm in the worng I do it easily... When I feel I am not . There is no chance! Great poem my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:47:00 AM

Yes--we all tend to act that way--so hard to do the "right" thing when angry..much appreciate SO..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2019 2:01:00 PM

Love knows no ego, vijay... this remarkable piece reminds us of this; so engaging as always...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:46:00 AM

So right you are..ego is destructive in love..much appreciate your visit and comments ..many thanks, Nette.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/28/2019 9:30:00 AM

This is a GREAT piece, Vijay. I was relieved to see how it ended. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:45:00 AM

Glad you like it Janice---much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/27/2019 9:45:00 PM

Vijay, it is amazing how many times we do this, knowing full well it is NOT the way to communicate. I have no idea why. You have brought this to my attention, and I like the way you subtly did this.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:43:00 AM

So true Caren..as true as life for most. Much appreciate your visit and comments Caren..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/27/2019 6:05:00 PM

Making the first move, apologizing for a heated discussion of before. It takes someone with an humble heart. The scene you paint with your words touch my heart. Forgiveness is key to any relationship as well. Communication being the most important part. It takes two being on the same page. This is so beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2019 7:42:00 AM

So much courage it takes to make that first move..much appreciate Brandy your analysis and comments..many thanks.