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There’s fire in the way your eyes do smolder with lust your gaze caresses every curve of my body making you grow bolder to trill and pluck and tingle every nerve. Arousing touch awakens my desire as waves of passion roll like timpani, ravished by your rapture takes me higher our movements in sonata symphony. Your bow - my violin we do unite on rhythmic notes of ecstasy we fly ~ entwined our heartstrings vibrate through the night emblazoned love songs burn across the sky. In Stradivarius intensity crescendo joins your virtuosity. Susan Ashley April 15, 2018 _______________________________ ~ Second Place ~ Contest: Your Best Sonnet 2018 Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton ~ Tenth Place ~ Contest: Any Rhyming Poem In April Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 7/13/2018 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/13/2018 5:59:00 PM
Eve, it so wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for the kindness of your comments and heartwarming congrats.. Warmest wishes always my lovely friend. ~Susan
Date: 7/12/2018 6:43:00 PM
Whew! This one's smokin' hot--and REALLY well-written, Susan. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/12/2018 6:57:00 PM
Janice, thank you for the sweet reward of your uplifting and wonderful response to my sonnet. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Your kindness and heartwarming congrats are held in my true appreciation. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 4:25:00 PM
No longer panting, cool analysis subduing passion's fires, the violin plays on -- a Stradivarius, craftmanship of the highest order. … Congratulations on your win in the contest, Susan! Warmest summer wishes, Gershon
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/10/2018 3:27:00 PM
Lol! I'm glad you finally caught your breath, dear Gershon, but can still hear the lingerings of the Stradivarius strains.. Thank you for the delight of your heartwarming and smile inducing comments which never fail to make my day so much brighter. Your kind congrats are truly appreciated my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 6:55:00 AM
Musically and sensually inspired! A wonderful read. Congrats on your win
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/10/2018 3:23:00 PM
Casarah, your beautiful comments are heartwarming and uplifting. Thank you for your wonderful visit and very kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 2:24:00 AM
Ah what a joy to read this gorgeous sonnet again. Congratulations Susan!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/10/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Nina, for the delight of your return visit and your kindhearted congrats. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 8:40:00 PM
A symphony of love...Congrats on your win Susan..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Joseph for the lovely kindness of your comments and your heartwarming congrats.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 7:02:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again on your win again. This is so erotic. Beautiful!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 10:44:00 PM
Susan, your return visit is appreciated twice as much. Your wonderful comments and heartwarming congrats are cherished. Warmest wishes my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 12:31:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet Susan, you are always at the top in my contests you know what I like, congrats again!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 12:49:00 PM
John, thank you for the honor of my lovely placement in your wonderful contest. It's always a joy to participate and your sponsorship is appreciated. I hope all is well with you my friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/8/2018 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations! Your words are beautiful and seductive. My favorite, "on rhythmic notes of ecstasy we fly."
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/8/2018 8:42:00 PM
Hello Alesia, it's a true delight to see you again! I hope all is well with you..Thank you for your beautiful comments and kindhearted congrats.. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 5/2/2018 11:55:00 PM
This is lovely, Susan, I've had to unbutton my shirt a bit to cool off. Viv x
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/3/2018 9:01:00 PM
Lol! Why stop there? Just take the ole shirt off, Viv! haha! I'm so happy you enjoyed my risque sonnet ;) I don't know what comes over me sometimes.. lol! Thank you for the delight of your visit and your wonderful comments, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 4/30/2018 4:32:00 PM
Lovely, Susan. Congrats on your win.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/30/2018 8:00:00 PM
Line, your kindness is truly appreciated.. ~Susan
Date: 4/30/2018 4:21:00 PM
Such a beautiful, sensual Sonnet, Susan. Don't know how I missed reading this before, but what lovely music you bring forth in your imagery. Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/30/2018 8:03:00 PM
Sandra, your valued feedback is always held in true appreciation and your beautiful comments and encouraging words fill my heart with joy. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me and for spending some of your time with my poem. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 4/30/2018 6:40:00 AM
Yes I would say so... beautiful music. Congratulations on your placement win with this oh so sensual poem!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/30/2018 3:09:00 PM
Your beautiful comments and kind congrats fill my heart with joy, Susan. Thank you for the delight of your visit and for your lovely comments. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 4/30/2018 6:00:00 AM
such sensuality! Love the romance and passion...beautifully expressed sweet Susan!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/30/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo, for the honor of my placement on your winner's list. I appreciate your sponsorship and it was a pleasure to participate in your wonderful contest. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:00:00 AM
thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2018 8:35:00 AM
So beautiful, Susan! Those last two lines like climax! Nice!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. It is always a great joy for me when you visit.. Your lovely comments inspire me to continue reaching and they are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/26/2018 4:20:00 PM
Wow... not only is this an awesome sonnet that flows and rhymes so well with excellent meter.. It is also very sensual... You do this form with such ease..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 5:31:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, for your awesome and inspiring comments. It's a funny thing - a sonnet - sometimes the lines come quite naturally for me, other times it's like pulling teeth to get the words to fall into place.. Warmest wishes, my friend. ~Susan
Date: 4/25/2018 9:19:00 PM
MY OH MY, but this room right here has the hottest temperature... Su, my dear, way to get them big boys sweat... Lol! I love it! High five my dear and sizzle love ~ Kina ~
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 1:40:00 PM
My dear friend, Kina, thank you for the high five, girl!! Your beautiful comments always put a big smile on my face :)) I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem and felt the heat and the 'sizzle' love Lol!! Sending lots of hugs and sizzle love your way, my lovely friend.. ~Su
Date: 4/25/2018 6:11:00 AM
Divine music: very beautiful, Susan. I also think strings, especially the violin, are very close to the heart and spirit of the creative vibration. And here, you have composed a symphonic masterpiece of affection.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 1:31:00 PM
I agree, Joe, there is something about strings, especially the violin, that stirs creativity and expresses deep emotions so soulfully. I am honored and humbled by your beautiful comments. The pleasure of your visit gladdens my heart.. Thank you, my friend for spending some time with my poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/24/2018 2:35:00 PM
Oh, how I wish Daver Austin were still alive to read this, Susan. He was a concert violinist and poet who posted here. Your magnificent "symphony of love" made me think of him. Sensual and arousing! Well done, Susan.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 1:14:00 PM
Carolyn, your wonderful visit and your heartwarming comments just thrill me. I am honored and humbled by your kind praise and your lovely sentiments have led me to the discovery of Daver Austin's beautiful poetry. Many many thank you's for sharing you cherished thoughts with me. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 4/23/2018 11:00:00 AM
A true measure of a poet, is the sonnet,,and this just blows me away..miles and miles high..What a wonderful mind and pen you have Susan...
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 1:10:00 PM
Harry, your visits are always such a pleasure and your comments are so beautifully insightful and heartwarming. Many many thank you's for reading and commenting so thoughtfully on my poem, you words gladden my heart.. Warmest wishes to you always, my friend. ~Susan
Date: 4/22/2018 7:28:00 PM
Having (finally) cooled off, back for a second look now: I see that I was so hot and bothered a week ago that I didn't even notice the title, and how beautifully you brought it to life. Bravo, Susan! ~ Gershon
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/22/2018 7:46:00 PM
My dear and witty friend, Gershon.. I still laugh out loud when I think about last week's comments :)) I'm glad you've had time to cool off.. whew! Thank you for coming back for a second look and sharing your lovely thoughts with me.. You just made my day! You are just the sweetest! :)) Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/21/2018 10:46:00 AM
Oh wow........In Stradivarius intensity you captured passion so cleverly !! Whew !! Well done!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/21/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Carrie, for your uplifting and appreciative comments and the honor of your lovely visit. I truly relish your beautiful poetry, dear friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Date: 4/21/2018 7:10:00 AM
It's so nice to read of passion in this way Susan. Spine tingling.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/21/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Jean, for your spine tingling comments :) Your kindness and warm words are truly appreciated. Best wishes ~Susan
Date: 4/20/2018 8:12:00 PM
Oh my sane twin! I am awestruck! Not speachless it does go on and on! Lol not saying being in awe doesn't do the same but.SUE OMG you rascal you! You have been the one wearing my muse out ! Lol! But my sane twin I do not hold it against you .....oops poor choice of words one never knows where that rascal of muse may take you next! I can tell we do share that top now better then ever before! I'm just like WOW! I am.....ok I've said that! Lmao! But my twin I am back......lol! Have you missed me?
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/3/2018 9:23:00 AM
Aha my sane but chafed twin! So glad you can understand my view lmao! Of course you would because we sit on top the same pole hahahaha! Oh and some thick cream will help that chafing! Lol I found the thicker the better in fact takes all that chafing right away my dear twin! Warmest affection Your mad twin
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 1:48:00 PM
Ahhhh, great idea! Maybe an escalator or a Stannah chair lift would work.. all that shimmying can chafe a girl in all the wrong places.. Hahaha! And, even though I portray myself as the 'sane twin', I'm sure anybody reading this would surely think me as crazy as you! Hahaha! Hey, but I am in GREAT COMPANY sharing the twin totem with you, my crazy cougar, mad twin.. Lol! :)) Love and hugs to you, girl!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/25/2018 10:17:00 PM
Ahhhh see you have just given me an idea.....bad bad bad thing to to a mad insane twin lol!As i read what you just wrote my mind drifted omg lmao now if i can only get it out to tell you lmao! oh ok hummm ok I think i have it control lol as i read what you said i thought to myself a truly mad insane twin would try to make you look like the crazy one lol! so guess i have to study up on comedy lol so people will think you insane in the dark laughing out loud!LMAO! oh my! Well i have regained my composer and must shimmy back up this pole lol! We need an elevator or such because too much shimmy is getting tiresome lmao!Until our next witty encounter lol! Hugs and much love my maybe sane twinlol
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/22/2018 7:37:00 PM
Your comments do the same to me, my crazy, mad twin.. your sane twin must look 'insane' lol! when I'm laughing out loud and shaking my head, all alone in the dark, in front of the computer screen at 11:00pm hahaha! (or whatever time, for that matter - whenever I read your silliness lol!!)!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/21/2018 4:53:00 PM
Oh my yes I have missed my twin(aka sane twin) so much lol! Well you have most definitely gave that muse a workout with this one! Oh geeze Sue you never cease to amaze me with your writes! This truly goes beyond spaechless! And at this moment I am thinking of your comment on my last poem and can't stop laughing you truly give my kids cause to think me mad when I burst out in loud laughter over what they think is nothing! Hahahaha!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/20/2018 8:41:00 PM
Hurray!! Woot Woot!! My crazy, speechless, mad, top of the totem pole, twin is back!!! I told you I'd keep the pole standing tall for your return :)) I have definitely missed you, my friend!! The totem is too quiet without you!!:) But then again, I haven't been here much either for the past week or two or three, life's been too damn busy lol!.. so the question is; Have you missed me, too..?!:)The 'rascally' muse did manage to inspire a poem for me this week though.. I've given it some rest so she should be ready for ya! lol!..
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/20/2018 8:13:00 PM
I have you and your comments lol! But seems the muse you wore out! Hahahaha! But again that is fine because you have written a magnificent poem here! Words ablaze with desirable flames! Oh la la! You go girl! ;) Oh I must have a word about these 400 characters lol! A fav my friend and twin loved it too much lol!
Date: 4/19/2018 5:10:00 PM
Hi Susan, you have me tingeling all over ::)) beautiful romantic imaginative write :) love the smokey eyes ::))Hugs~~~Niall
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/19/2018 10:44:00 PM
Niall, thank you for your awesome comments that light me up with a smile. I'm so happy the trilling and the plucking made you tingly :)) I always delight in your wonderful visits, my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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