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Make Way For the Dolphins and Whales

today we don't think therefore we are not descartes is dead and gone machines and computers work and think for us our minds are shrinking, withering and decaying from lack of exercise

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:49:00 PM

congrats Tim, always ~ LINDA

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 11/9/2013 5:43:00 PM

Congratulation Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2013 4:30:00 AM

Congrats on the win , Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2013 7:39:00 PM

i love this verse.. Tim, i have enjoyed the breeding machines do... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2013 7:31:00 PM

oh I did see this one though! and it has been more than four days!! it was six.

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/8/2013 2:17:00 PM

Nice to see you trying different forms, I do that and sit back waiting for the omg remarks. lol....nice try and thought...Seren

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/7/2013 8:06:00 AM

Tim - Form be damned. It's the poem that counts and you've delved deep into the human condition. love, Kathy

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/3/2013 9:36:00 PM

Are the syllables in each line supposed to add up to a prime sequentially? If so this would be a very hard poem to construct. I applaud your effort. Great job.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/3/2013 4:03:00 PM

i don't know what form this is supposed to be, but i like the poem just the way it is!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/3/2013 12:49:00 PM

This is a very wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and intriguing poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 12:25:00 PM

well, I don't really understand that form but I sure like what you did by trying it!!