Tim Ryerson Poet Suzette Prime

Make Way For the Dolphins and Whales

today
we don't think
therefore we are not
descartes is dead and gone
machines and computers work and think for us
our minds are shrinking, withering and decaying from lack of exercise

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Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2013 at 10:49 PM congrats Tim, always ~ LINDA

Fatima Nusairat November 9, 2013 at 5:43 PM Congratulation Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 4:30 AM Congrats on the win , Tim

Poet Destroyer A January 13, 2013 at 7:39 PM i love this verse.. Tim, i have enjoyed the breeding machines do... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2013 at 7:31 PM oh I did see this one though! and it has been more than four days!! it was six.

Seren Roberts January 8, 2013 at 2:17 PM Nice to see you trying different forms, I do that and sit back waiting for the omg remarks. lol....nice try and thought...Seren

Kathryn Collins January 7, 2013 at 8:06 AM Tim - Form be damned. It's the poem that counts and you've delved deep into the human condition. love, Kathy

Jon A Cavanaugh January 3, 2013 at 9:36 PM Are the syllables in each line supposed to add up to a prime sequentially? If so this would be a very hard poem to construct. I applaud your effort. Great job.

Ilene Bauer January 3, 2013 at 4:03 PM i don't know what form this is supposed to be, but i like the poem just the way it is!

Russell Sivey January 3, 2013 at 12:49 PM This is a very wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and intriguing poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2013 at 12:25 PM well, I don't really understand that form but I sure like what you did by trying it!!