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Make Me Feel Alive

The beats pound faster as the clouds roll in storm winds blowing and sunlight disappears rain soaked stories are soon approaching washing away all I had ever lived for Holding on in the recesses of my heart the euphoria of love can't be replicated floating dreams in an everlasting scene fighting feelings closed in a far away breeze Pain comes in many forms too much for one soul to bleed life cant be lived if left alone the touch of an angel is all I need Whisper softly you still care for me show me just a little sign look into these eyes one more time come and make me feel alive

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/18/2017 9:14:00 AM

This a beautiful and sad poem. I hope over time memories will release their tight grip on your heart Tim:) amitiés

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/17/2017 5:45:00 PM

Memories can be beautiful and they can also cause much pain. The loneliness of missing someone is a hard thing to live with and it can take down even those once strong. "life can't be lived if left alone" says more than some know. Well written from the heart Tim :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/17/2017 4:57:00 PM

Hi Tim , beautiful heart felt write I really enjoyed this Free verse ' Pain comes in many forms ' so true my friend :))nice to meet ::)) hugs from Ireland

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/17/2017 12:49:00 PM

Such sadness here lately friend Tim, here's to better days...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2017 12:45:00 PM

- Small signs of love make great for the heart, Tim - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/17/2017 12:27:00 PM

Your poetry is so warm and heartfelt with true emotions stirred in your soul. Loved it ~*

John Hamilton

Date: 5/17/2017 10:45:00 AM

Really well done Tim, sometimes it's better to let go of the past, and enjoy a better today and future. Especially if it's hopeless for a lost love to be found again!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2017 10:51:00 AM

It sounds so simple John. I'm sure brighter days are ahead.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/17/2017 10:38:00 AM

We all need that little sign in our life that somebody cares..Dont we...You expressed emotions so deeply..The wanton feeling here cant go unnoticed...Awesome.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2017 10:50:00 AM

Yes we do. Thanks for visiting my poem today Charma.

Darren White

Date: 5/17/2017 8:54:00 AM

Beautiful poem, how the sad weather resonates in your heart. Keep dreaming good dreams, don't give up :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Darren. I can only try.