Magical Mountain Made of Whitest Stone

Magical Mountain Made Of Whitest Stone

Majestic mountain made of magic stone
I climbed every night as a lonely child.
Tall and regal, it stood there all alone
symbol of world so fantastic and wild!

Atop its peak in my racing night dreams
looking across earth's fantastic skies.
Resting below, forests and flowing streams
bright, magical realm where nobody dies.

Deep within each night's visionary quest
prayers for family, sleeping nearby.
Young, brave climber daring courageous best
with fantasy and thrills on each climb's try!

Magical mountain made of whitest stone.
Conquered by a child, made of flesh and bone!

R. J. Lindley
March 9th, 1971

Syllables Per Line:
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables: 140
Total # Words: 94 

(Old) Note: How I long again to be that innocent child from two years ago, living with warmest embrace of my father's love before his death...
Life just suxs and tries to destroy me...


New note: Life again sent its deepest blues, but old age has brought wisdom, those blues and accompanying depths of pain - that--
Can reach out to destroy,
yet only find a stronger heart
For this soul tis no longer an innocent boy
that had no well lit path to now  chart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/20/2017 3:28:00 AM
A lovely old write, Robert, that stays fresh even now:) I like the 'four lines' too in your new note:)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/20/2017 11:19:00 AM
Thank you my good friend. I am trying to remember to write new notes when presenting my decades old poems..
Date: 2/20/2017 12:38:00 AM
Well Robert another beautiful sonnet coming from your pen, loved it, yes we all wish we could go back to those wonderful days, wouldn't it be nice to conquer a mountain of whitest stone but in our dreams we do. Hope you are well take care.......Vera
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Date: 2/20/2017 11:18:00 AM
So great to see your reply my dear friend. Tis nice for me to conquer anything these days, as I feel most energy drained from me most days. Give a big hello from us to Peter and all your clan my friend. God bless..
Date: 2/19/2017 12:38:00 PM
Well crafted my friend.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/19/2017 12:49:00 PM
Thank you my friend.. Was written centuries ago it seems. I wish I could return to those days back in 1971, to give ADVANCED WARNING TO THAT YOUNG AND TORTURED SOUL..
Date: 2/19/2017 2:32:00 AM
This made me close my eyes and be a child that can walk and climb again. Such wonderful poetry! 7 and favourite.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/19/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Darren. Some days I long to be a child again, exploring the world from a huge front yard. Climbing trees trying to touch the pretty blue sky. Having adventures in the forest, finding new creatures, etc
Date: 2/18/2017 9:27:00 PM
I wasn't sure with the title, but I have to tell you Robert, this poem simply warmed my cold heart! Thank you!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. Very glad that this piece warmed you up and removed that temporary chill from your very kind and talented heart!
Date: 2/18/2017 8:34:00 PM
Wonderful childhood memory Robert, I do love these kinds of writes; my dad's death almost killed me too, but he told me to be the artist I am and take hold of the pen. Clearly you were born to write poetry. I especially love the last line in this poem.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 9:38:00 PM
Thank you Keith.. Sorry about your great loss of your father. We are blessed that you heeded the wise words given you my friend. Because you are not only a great artist but also a sincere, kind and true one..
Date: 2/18/2017 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful write, Robert: The secret of life is to never lose the magic. It is the essence of imagination and yours is a great one. Hugs, SuZ
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 9:34:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Love of family and seeing the magic that is a part of life is key ..
Date: 2/18/2017 12:25:00 PM
So poignant and attention-getting. I hope I have that stronger heart (and a bit of wisdom).
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thank you my talented friend! This time I benefited from my old age. With a much stronger and advanced mind, will, heart and soul.. A blessing....
Date: 2/18/2017 12:16:00 PM
Innocence can be stolen or lost in many ways, Robert. It is still OK to dream and fantasize. As a matter of fact, it is a necessity. Reality is much too real! I love the sonnet!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 12:58:00 PM
So true. Long ago I experienced a death that destroyed me(my father's), recently again came that pain/darkness with the death of my cherished and beloved mother. This time , Light was deep within my soul and came forth to rescue me, a blessing from God.
Date: 2/18/2017 12:03:00 PM
Ok, Robert, you know I love the final couplets!! Well done my friend!! :) Big Hugggs!!! Deb
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2017 12:56:00 PM
Thanks my friend.. Appreciate your comments.
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