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Magical

There was something magical that night, Fairies flew around the green birches, Others glided up around the church's steeple, Until tired they rested in their perches. Below two lovers hugged on a small bench, Whilst fairies hummed a mellow melody, The magic worked in a great symphony, Their lips brushed softly, so heavenly. Alas, time passed and waited for no one. The fairies dispersed to their magic alley. The lovers hugged and walked home, A small cottage, full of magic of the valley.

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Date: 1/3/2024 5:02:00 PM
This was sweet and magical, I loved reading this precious gem.
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Date: 11/20/2023 7:13:00 AM
Sweet and fun as magic fills the air. hugs :)
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Date: 11/18/2023 12:42:00 AM
So sweet. Simply magical dear friend! You have such a way of beauty in your sweet poetry.
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:36:00 PM
Such a magical captivating poem Victor! Love it….Debx
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Date: 11/16/2023 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Victor, cannot think of a a poet with such sharp wisdom and imagination…so very deserving of this win. Pangie xxxx
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Date: 11/16/2023 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading your "Magical" write/very lovely. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 7:50:00 PM
So sweet; so beautiful! Clever images. Thanks for writing this.
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:02:00 PM
Lovely poem Victor. It rhymes and flows so well..
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:55:00 PM
How charming this is, Victor
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:53:00 PM
such a lovely and 'magical' love poem, Victor. The imagery was fantastic...I loved 'fairies hummed a mellow melody" I believe love is magical...I appreciate your words and visits. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 11/15/2023 1:39:00 PM
Magical moments, delightfully presented. Excellent, as always, Victor.
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Date: 11/15/2023 12:25:00 PM
Im late to read this but I absolutely love this magical poem the imagery you’ve painted is so ethereal throughout and is a very heartfelt poem. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:51:00 AM
I enjoyed this mesmerizing tale of magic and love in a beautiful valley. Blessings.
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Date: 11/15/2023 9:44:00 AM
An enchanting write Victor, best wishes
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:37:00 AM
A magical and sweet love poem Victor. Well written. Have a nice day!
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:34:00 AM
There is so much magic in your sweet poem. Love it. All the Best dear Victor!
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Date: 11/15/2023 2:32:00 AM
Magically delicious, Victor. Nicely written, my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:35:00 PM
I can visualize all of the beauty you have created here dear Victor ! I want to jump into the imagery and be a part of the story ! Lovely . Hugs, Sussn :)
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Date: 11/14/2023 10:01:00 AM
Lovely scene of a magical day. Many blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2023 7:02:00 AM
- Lovely and magical, Victor ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/14/2023 5:47:00 AM
Victor, your poetic composition is indeed imbued with an ethereal charm, evoking a sense of enchantment and captivating allure. The vivid imagery conjured within transports me to a world teeming with ethereal beings, fluttering about in graceful harmony.
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Date: 11/14/2023 5:33:00 AM
Victor, a sweet and enchanting poem.
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:56:00 AM
I can visualize those fairies all about! Truly magical!
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