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- Magical -

The fog is creeping
                                                  toward land
                                                  sliding grey
                                               moist wrapping
                                              Creates mystery
                                      in the veil over the water lilies
                                          Soon invisible landscape
                                               how dusty ghosts
                                                  from the past
                                            dancing with the nixie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kulkarni Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Beautiful poetry of a foggy morning!
Baker Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Congrats on making the Top 100 New Poems list, Anne-Lise! WTG my friend. Have a nice weekend! Bill
M  Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:55 PM
Congratulations warm Sunshine on POTD!! Debx
George Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:45 AM
Water lilies veiled by the fog must be still a beautiful sight ! I missed seeing this magical scene you have painted. Congratulations Anne on your POTD. Love and hugs
Tor Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Coming back to Congratulate you for receiving such high Honors. God bless you...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD!!!
Kitchin Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Anne-Lise, sorry I missed this yesterday, beautiful imagery, a belated congratulations on POTD!
Meadows Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Lawrence Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Visions abound from your mysterious and lovely words dear Anne-Lise ! Congratulations on POTD ! Hugs, Susan :)
Anaya Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:49 PM
The sun dissipates or the wind blows, until then the fog hovers in silence and it mystifies, you have beguiled with your imagination. Congratulations on the POTD Anne-Lise!:)
McBride  Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:31 PM
Congratulations on POTD, love it, beautiful poem , crafted into a picture: )
Nicole Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 5:33 PM
"Fog creates mystery over the invisible landscape." This image *is* mysterious and creepy, yet it holds beauty and magic, all at the same time. You truly are an artist with your words, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Edmonds  Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Such beautiful poetry and photo, you must live in a beautiful place with lovely scenery Anne-Lise. I learnt what a nixie is today too. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Doll Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Anne-Lise, I also learned a new word today-nixie. Captivating and visual poem. Congratulations on POTD. An instant fav for me~ Waren
Goldsmith Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Magical" is a magical write. Have a blessed day with your win......................
Poet Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Back with Heartfelt Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, Enjoy your honor
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Thoroughly deserved. Hugs.
Fowler Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Lovely to see this imaginative POTD Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :)
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:46 AM
It's wonderful to see one of your compositions as poem of the day, Anne-Lise. Congratulations!
May Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Congrats on POTD Anne, Very nicely penned
Goyal Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on the POTD! Loved reading this :))
Baker Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Anne-Lise. Your imagery was exquisite. Enjoy you special day of recognition my friend. Bill
Cassell Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on POTD
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:06 AM
So lovely! And I learned a new word, “nixie”, I love it! Congratulations on POTD! xomo
DiMino Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Sunshine is light without and within:) Congratulations! Blessings.
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