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I found a home in your poetry for my sporadic melancholy It was your music that set my heartbeat on other occasions, it wept like the celestial scream of seraphim you tried to prove it to me after that demonic insanity strives over what we all share that there is gloom and sorrow as well as tomorrow.
Written: October 26, 2022

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Date: 10/28/2022 4:54:00 AM
The pain of today will be over. Tomorrow will be a new day... Perhaps it may bring much hope and sunshine. Powerful poetry dear Lasaad !
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Date: 10/27/2022 2:20:00 PM
Well said, Lasaad. The world brings an onslaught of chaos and confusion. It sad and dibilitating when focused on. It is true we have hope in tomorrow. How abides inside, in the spiritual dimension of our existence. We need faith in something bigger than the world. Quote "In this world there will be trails and tribulations, but be of good cheer, for I have overcome the world." Jesus
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful verse with great sad feeling. Tomorrow is always another day to live with hopes of love. Many blessings to you my friend and wishes come true.
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:29:00 AM
Well done, my friend. Keep up the golden pen.
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:29:00 AM
- Melancholy is a heavy burden to carry ... let's hope and believe that everything is better tomorrow ... a profound and masterful poem, Las - hugs
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Date: 10/27/2022 8:32:00 AM
Gloom and sorrow, but better tomorrow. Very nice portrayal of hope Lasaad. :)
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:40:00 AM
Amid sorrow there is hope of tomorrow--well said my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:02:00 AM
Let’s hope tomorrow is not all gloom and sorrow, what the world needs now is happiness and joy for every man, woman, girl and boy. Enjoyed the read… Belle
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Date: 10/27/2022 1:29:00 AM
Satan will never have the last word.
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:06:00 PM
I really like the way you pulled the lines around and tied the bow: 'as well as tomorrow!" Elizabeth
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