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Luxury

As I wend my way around curving roads
up high into the mountains
I finally arrive at the Eight Gables Inn.
I wonder what it is that drives me here!
Perhaps I have developed wings
and flew across the Atlantic towards
The Great Smoky Mountains
on my adventurous ride
to the Blue Ridge Mountains.
 
Tired I hope the Inn
will live up to its reputation.
The sun is setting as I view
the purple orange skies darken,
whilst here and there lights
in desolate cottages twinkle in the dark.
I hasten to my private bath
and slowly sink in the warm water,
overpowered by the smell of soapy foams.
Pleased with my silky skin
I put on a plush bathrobe
luxuriously enjoying the feel
of the soft fabric against my spores,
and with a graceful dive find myself
on top of a feather-top bed.
This is the life of luxury...
 
Until I feel the taste of blotting paper
that cover my whole mouth.
I open my eyes and know
it was all a dream, alas.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:21 PM
A realistic and soothing dream Victor. Wish I were there! :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 3:26 AM
Victor, I enjoyed your poem, some dreams we would like to last longer!
Tor Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Victor what a wonderful dream to have. Perhaps someday you can take part in it and travel and have that experience. If I was rich I'd send you a plane ticket to any place you'd wish to go...
Edmonds  Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 6:12 AM
A luxurious dream you had Victor, I’ve enjoyed the journey too… Hugs, Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:01 AM
What a wonderful write. I enjoyed this trip with no bags. I did not want to wake up. Have a wonderful day..............
Gentile Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Victor, what a glorious dream it was though!! Your words make me want to visit and stay!! Great poem! Happy Friday !!
Eslinger Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Oh nooooooo! Upon feading this you’re bound to have lots of us Soupers in the tub with you! Goodness! I want a dream like that. Plus, i must add i jusr love looking out to see the twinkling lights in houses at night. We live almost atop a hill. The sight is so warm . Twinkling stars above & windows stretching out below. A great poem! Luv ya!
Horsman Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Still makes for excellent poetry, Victor, Harry.
DiMino Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Top Self poetry, Victor! Oh well, cheaper than the real thing...and, apparently none the less appreciated by your heart. Often for those with means and power, like everything else, it is never enough.
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Dreams are sometimes pleasurable others not. This one well done and said. I like my own bed
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Don’t knock the dreams Victor, it’s just another dimension of reality your tapping into, you’ve written a most entertaining poem, I found it quite absorbing especially the blotting paper lol, cheers David
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Now, that's what I call a real dream vacation, Victor. It was so perfect-the kind of dream you wish would go on and on! Your writing is superb. :)
May Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Dreams can take us to so many places, Very nicely penned Victor
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:37 AM
What a lovely dream. If we can keep having dreams like these every so often, we can enjoy the finer things in life without ever having to worry about money. What a shame that was all an imaginary concept.
Pandit Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:20 AM
You described the place beautifully. Dream or not-- you held my attention from start to end.
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 5:48 AM
Luxurious dream, Victor, sad that it was just an evanescent dream...
George Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Beautiful dream. If we get such dreams once in a while, we can enjoy luxury without spending a penny ! You are so imaginative, dear Victor !
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:19 AM
- Luxury has never tempted me ... and I don't dream of it ... my own bed is the best :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:16 AM
You certainly came down to earth with a bump but the memory lingers for the rest of the day Buy a lottery ticket Victor, who knows you could be living the dream. Tom
Volumes Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 12:57 AM
But a lovely Dream Victor You had me enjoying the luxury of it all... This poem gets a fave from me.
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February 2, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Thank you for the fav. Hugs.
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