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Lust's Bliss

Lascivious tryst moistens insatiable lips. Composed for Lewis Raynes' "Lust" Poetry Contest 17.07.25

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Date: 8/4/2017 12:41:00 PM
well done Well done!
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Date: 7/31/2017 1:37:00 AM
moist words. lovely image. nice, Maureen. Ram
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/31/2017 10:09:00 PM
;) xomo!
Date: 7/29/2017 7:02:00 PM
I really like those words you used, Maureen, very nice!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/30/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :) lovely day to you! xomo
Date: 7/29/2017 2:02:00 PM
Great monoku Maureen...best wishes
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/29/2017 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :) xomo
Date: 7/28/2017 5:44:00 PM
the stiff tongue can leave one sprung from that gushy song of southern lips being strummed possibly with a lil help from the thumb leaving her frame unfashionably numb....riveting selection Maureen....I see I am not the only naughty one here....lol
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/29/2017 6:58:00 AM
*gulp* I'm writhing from Your naughtiness! I think I need a cigarette, crap, I don't smoke lol ;) Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2017 4:06:00 PM
Lovely tribute. Thanks for sharing.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/28/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you kind poet :)
Date: 7/28/2017 3:16:00 PM
Hi Maureen, What a "smokin hot" one-liner! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/28/2017 5:37:00 PM
Where there's smoke there's fire... ;) Thank You! xomo
Date: 7/28/2017 12:40:00 PM
Sizzling short kisses this poem be, Maureen. As the old R&B song said: You oughta be starting something. Hot poetry. Love and smiles.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/28/2017 5:36:00 PM
Sizzling- love that! Thank you dear poet! Hugs n' love from da mo
Date: 7/27/2017 6:29:00 AM
Very (((sultry))) my friend lol...^WW^
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2017 7:17:00 AM
I love that word ;) Thank You! xomo
Date: 7/26/2017 5:07:00 PM
Hadda put safety glasses on to read this one! ;-)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2017 7:15:00 AM
Aw Yeah! Maybe shoulda put a warning in the title ;) xomo!
Date: 7/26/2017 4:54:00 PM
lol! thanks for sharing this gem.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank You! :) xomo
Date: 7/26/2017 4:49:00 PM
So few words that turn into steamy thoughts. Very naughty thoughts. Great job!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2017 7:11:00 AM
Hee hee! ;o Thank you James! xomo
Date: 7/26/2017 11:14:00 AM
Ummmmmm....WOW! You have some of my fav words here, dear...Tryst and insatiable. Good luck in the contest with this sizzler. Hugs
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/26/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank You lovely! I love that I conjured some of your faves, I aim to please ;) xomo!
Date: 7/26/2017 5:35:00 AM
Ok, this is lustful! Great writing my dear, Maureen. Good luck in the contest! Of course you know that Lust's Bliss is very fleeting! Haha!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/26/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank goodness for that! Can you imagine? It would be exhausting never mind nothing getting done ;) Thank you kind soul xomo!
Date: 7/25/2017 9:25:00 PM
Very sexy and naughty Maureen! I love it. Good luck! :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/25/2017 10:22:00 PM
Tee hee hee! Thank you Susan ;) xomo!
Date: 7/25/2017 11:54:00 AM
Wow...very steamy
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/25/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thankya! ;) xomo
Date: 7/25/2017 11:24:00 AM
lipsmackingly good Maureen and I love the flow and internal rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/25/2017 11:28:00 AM
;) sought someth'n sexy n' salivatin' to say lol xomo!

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