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Lust's Bliss

Lascivious tryst moistens insatiable lips. Composed for Lewis Raynes' "Lust" Poetry Contest 17.07.25

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/4/2017 12:41:00 PM

well done Well done!

Ram R. V.

Date: 7/31/2017 1:37:00 AM

moist words. lovely image. nice, Maureen. Ram

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/31/2017 10:09:00 PM

;) xomo!

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/30/2017 3:18:00 AM

Hi Maureen , like a powerful magnet :))))hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/30/2017 8:03:00 AM

Exactly isn't it?! From what I remember anyway lol ;) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2017 7:02:00 PM

I really like those words you used, Maureen, very nice!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/30/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :) lovely day to you! xomo

Joseph May

Date: 7/29/2017 2:02:00 PM

Great monoku Maureen...best wishes

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/29/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/28/2017 5:44:00 PM

the stiff tongue can leave one sprung from that gushy song of southern lips being strummed possibly with a lil help from the thumb leaving her frame unfashionably numb....riveting selection Maureen....I see I am not the only naughty one here....lol

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/29/2017 6:58:00 AM

*gulp* I'm writhing from Your naughtiness! I think I need a cigarette, crap, I don't smoke lol ;) Thank you!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2017 4:06:00 PM

Lovely tribute. Thanks for sharing.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/28/2017 5:38:00 PM

Thank you kind poet :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/28/2017 3:16:00 PM

Hi Maureen, What a "smokin hot" one-liner! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/28/2017 5:37:00 PM

Where there's smoke there's fire... ;) Thank You! xomo

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/28/2017 12:40:00 PM

Sizzling short kisses this poem be, Maureen. As the old R&B song said: You oughta be starting something. Hot poetry. Love and smiles.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/28/2017 5:36:00 PM

Sizzling- love that! Thank you dear poet! Hugs n' love from da mo

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/27/2017 6:29:00 AM

Very (((sultry))) my friend lol...^WW^

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2017 7:17:00 AM

I love that word ;) Thank You! xomo

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/26/2017 5:07:00 PM

Hadda put safety glasses on to read this one! ;-)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2017 7:15:00 AM

Aw Yeah! Maybe shoulda put a warning in the title ;) xomo!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2017 4:54:00 PM

lol! thanks for sharing this gem.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2017 7:14:00 AM

Thank You! :) xomo

James Swartz

Date: 7/26/2017 4:49:00 PM

So few words that turn into steamy thoughts. Very naughty thoughts. Great job!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2017 7:11:00 AM

Hee hee! ;o Thank you James! xomo

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/26/2017 11:14:00 AM

Ummmmmm....WOW! You have some of my fav words here, dear...Tryst and insatiable. Good luck in the contest with this sizzler. Hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/26/2017 12:08:00 PM

Thank You lovely! I love that I conjured some of your faves, I aim to please ;) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/26/2017 5:35:00 AM

Ok, this is lustful! Great writing my dear, Maureen. Good luck in the contest! Of course you know that Lust's Bliss is very fleeting! Haha!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

Thank goodness for that! Can you imagine? It would be exhausting never mind nothing getting done ;) Thank you kind soul xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/25/2017 9:25:00 PM

Very sexy and naughty Maureen! I love it. Good luck! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2017 10:22:00 PM

Tee hee hee! Thank you Susan ;) xomo!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/25/2017 11:54:00 AM

Wow...very steamy

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2017 12:47:00 PM

Thankya! ;) xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2017 11:24:00 AM

lipsmackingly good Maureen and I love the flow and internal rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2017 11:28:00 AM

;) sought someth'n sexy n' salivatin' to say lol xomo!