Lust

Animalistic in behavior seeded by hungers need deep within the confines of your body dangerous wild attraction banged into my twisted mind pleading for my own release. 11/5/2018 "One of The Seven Deadly Sins" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Gideon Foli

Date: 3/27/2020 2:29:00 AM

Awesomely impressive Jezz. Congrats and keep them coming. Hugs and love!!!

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/14/2020 9:18:00 PM

Thank you Gideon, very kind of you. Hope you have a wonderful week and sorry my response is a tad late. Hugs, Jess

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/5/2019 2:41:00 PM

I see this was a top winner!! Congrats on the win...sounds like a winner to me!!

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/30/2019 1:37:00 PM

Thank you Pace, much appreciated. Jess

M Asim Nehal

Date: 11/29/2018 1:28:00 PM

Fantastic poem , Congrats for win.

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/30/2019 1:35:00 PM

Thank you M, appreciate it. Jess

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Jessica. Well done.

Jt Nyx
Date: 10/29/2019 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Line, really sorry for such a long wait on the response, have been away for some time. Appreciate your kindness. Jess

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2018 3:12:00 PM

very packed with the emotion behind it. Congrats on your win, Jessica.

Jt Nyx
Date: 10/29/2019 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, sorry took so long to comment bk. Always appreciate your kind words. Jess

Susan Palli

Date: 11/7/2018 12:43:00 PM

Can feel the emotions! Wow. Great write. Congrats, Jessica.

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/7/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping into to read my work. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Best Wishes, Jess

Chris Green

Date: 11/7/2018 7:12:00 AM

Wow, this was really good and I can see why it placed so high in the contest. Congratulations on that. Your poem definitely captured the essence of lust. Wonderfully written.

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/7/2018 1:05:00 PM

Appreciate the kind words and congrats Chris.Thank you so very much. Hugs, jess

Deb Radke

Date: 11/6/2018 8:36:00 PM

Congratulations, Jessica, on your winning placement in the contest. You've written an excellent description of lust. Well done here. My best. Deb

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/6/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Debs, I greatly appreciate the kinds words. I hope today finds you well. Best Wishes, Jess

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/6/2018 4:09:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Jessica!:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your top win!

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/6/2018 9:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Edward for the opportunity. I am very honored to have placed so high in your contest with all the other wonderful writers. Best Regards, Jess