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Lust

Animalistic in behavior

                    seeded by hungers need
 
                deep within the confines of your body
                       
                     dangerous wild attraction

                   banged into my twisted mind
                 
                   pleading for my own release.



11/5/2018

   "One of The Seven Deadly Sins" Poetry Contest
    Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Gideon Foli Date: 3/27/2020 2:29:00 AM Awesomely impressive Jezz. Congrats and keep them coming. Hugs and love!!! Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 7/14/2020 9:18:00 PM Thank you Gideon, very kind of you. Hope you have a wonderful week and sorry my response is a tad late. Hugs, Jess

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 11/5/2019 2:41:00 PM I see this was a top winner!! Congrats on the win...sounds like a winner to me!! Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/30/2019 1:37:00 PM Thank you Pace, much appreciated. Jess

M Asim Nehal Date: 11/29/2018 1:28:00 PM Fantastic poem , Congrats for win. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/30/2019 1:35:00 PM Thank you M, appreciate it. Jess

Line Gauthier Date: 11/11/2018 1:50:00 PM Congrats on your top win, Jessica. Well done. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 10/29/2019 3:57:00 PM Thank you Line, really sorry for such a long wait on the response, have been away for some time. Appreciate your kindness. Jess

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/7/2018 3:12:00 PM very packed with the emotion behind it. Congrats on your win, Jessica. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 10/29/2019 3:56:00 PM Thank you Andrea, sorry took so long to comment bk. Always appreciate your kind words. Jess

Susan Palli Date: 11/7/2018 12:43:00 PM Can feel the emotions! Wow. Great write. Congrats, Jessica. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/7/2018 1:07:00 PM Thank you so much for stopping into to read my work. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Best Wishes, Jess

Chris Green Date: 11/7/2018 7:12:00 AM Wow, this was really good and I can see why it placed so high in the contest. Congratulations on that. Your poem definitely captured the essence of lust. Wonderfully written. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/7/2018 1:05:00 PM Appreciate the kind words and congrats Chris.Thank you so very much. Hugs, jess

Deb Radke Date: 11/6/2018 8:36:00 PM Congratulations, Jessica, on your winning placement in the contest. You've written an excellent description of lust. Well done here. My best. Deb Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/6/2018 9:28:00 PM Thank you Debs, I greatly appreciate the kinds words. I hope today finds you well. Best Wishes, Jess

Edward Ibeh Date: 11/6/2018 4:09:00 PM Thanks for participating in my contest, Jessica!:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your top win! Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 11/6/2018 9:27:00 PM Thank you so much Edward for the opportunity. I am very honored to have placed so high in your contest with all the other wonderful writers. Best Regards, Jess