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Lunacy

Listening to voices, living in my head, they lambaste my troubled mind, leaving me no peace. I laugh, cry, scream for them to let me go! There's no hope. Life spins out of control. 3/16/17

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Date: 4/2/2017 5:34:00 PM
The voices speak to us all at times! The secret is when to listen and when to tell them to shut up! Nice use of the form!
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Date: 3/18/2017 7:48:00 PM
A serious affliction that rises with the full moon..Well expressed Kim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 3/18/2017 5:38:00 PM
You just spoke to me. It really touch my present situation. Good work.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Omojewve!
Date: 3/18/2017 2:16:00 PM
I love this - so much we could write about the voices in our heads! (most of it humorous) Very nicely done, Kim - I enjoyed it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay! So glad you liked it.
Date: 3/18/2017 7:27:00 AM
Oh, Kim. What a piece this is. It touched my profoundly because it mirrors my life experiences. Bless you for sharing
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen! I appreciate the visit.
Date: 3/17/2017 8:35:00 PM
Feel like that often! Nicely done, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!

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