Kim Merryman Poet Pleiades

Lunacy

Listening to voices,
living in my head, they
lambaste my troubled mind,
leaving me no peace. I
laugh, cry, scream for them to
let me go! There's no hope.
Life spins out of control.

3/16/17

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John Michaels April 2, 2017 at 5:34 PM The voices speak to us all at times! The secret is when to listen and when to tell them to shut up! Nice use of the form!

Joseph May March 18, 2017 at 7:48 PM A serious affliction that rises with the full moon..Well expressed Kim Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:24 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown March 18, 2017 at 5:38 PM You just spoke to me. It really touch my present situation. Good work. Kim Merryman March 18, 2017 at 5:47 PM Thank you, Omojewve!

CayCay Godwin March 18, 2017 at 2:16 PM I love this - so much we could write about the voices in our heads! (most of it humorous) Very nicely done, Kim - I enjoyed it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Kim Merryman March 18, 2017 at 5:47 PM Thank you, CayCay! So glad you liked it.

Eileen Manassian March 18, 2017 at 7:27 AM Oh, Kim. What a piece this is. It touched my profoundly because it mirrors my life experiences. Bless you for sharing Kim Merryman March 18, 2017 at 5:46 PM Thank you, Eileen! I appreciate the visit.

Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2017 at 8:35 PM Feel like that often! Nicely done, Kim! Kim Merryman March 18, 2017 at 5:42 PM Thank you, Kim!