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Lucky Star

You are darling shining out across great oceans far away in many seas Floating on one boat a goddess rising in this great wave of golden kisses Crashing on deck all over you baby cast under your spell overpowering love In strong romantic feelings weaving intricate threads of golden emotions sewn into the most beautiful of hearts Glowing out from you I see a treasure in potions of feelings our stars cross path Magically flowers blooming blossoms enchanting out bewitched wide eyed dazzled completely blows the mind a lucky star shine out

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Date: 3/3/2014 10:22:00 PM
This poem shines so brightly and beautifully, my friend! I really like the magical and enchanting ambience that this poem creates. A wonderful, wonderful poem, Liam!
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Date: 3/2/2014 9:31:00 AM
Very very beautiful dear Liam
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:52:00 AM
:) A star shines out.....indeed, Liam. Let it shine....the light from your words shines out....Beautiful, my dear
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