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Lucky 8

Up at eight in the morn with no discomfort to capture some warm summer rays. I sit fast and adore the great pulchritude and its vast paragon of purity; of green comfort and unspoiled charisma of the countryside. Till the impatient orange-red blazing sun makes its entrance and wandering hours were done; a divine revelation bursting with pride. 7/8/2018 1.) Revelation 2.) Pulchritude 3.) Adore 4.) Discomfort 5.) Paragon 6.) Charisma 7.) Blazing 8.) Eight Poetry Contest: Rhyme Time 5- Lucky 8 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 8/1/2018 1:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win. Nice use of the words to describe nature.
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/30/2018 11:57:00 AM
mrs roper, this poem is simply great....and for you to win was absolutely no mistake....you painted such a Beautiful scene....I pinched myself to ensure it wasn't a dream....and just relaxed in all the bliss....so congrats to you for making the winners list....;)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/30/2018 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much , Eric... :) you always inspire me... Hugs Eve
Date: 7/17/2018 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful story with the words used flawlessly, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:44:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem with a gorgeous imagery, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:28:00 AM
I agree, wonderful imagery, Eve. my mind's eye captures the moment Happy Monday xx00
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:17:00 PM
gorgeous imagery Eve. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2018 4:36:00 PM
very well done, Eve! One more contest I need to get to work on myself!!
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