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TEN YEARS ON ... HIGH SCHOOL REUNION You were a paragon of sheer pulchritude your charisma showed, you always looked fab I adore your dress as you step out of the cab but you’re in discomfort and in an awful mood! It’s a revelation but you really need to diet (You’d always been petite, a tiny size eight) Now your tush is huge, you’ve put on weight I don’t want a blazing row, so I’ll just be quiet! Rhyme time 8 Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 7/5/18

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/1/2018 1:41:00 AM

Congratulations, Jan on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 4:56:00 AM

Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/31/2018 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed how you did the words. Well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/6/2018 4:49:00 PM

Wonderful job, I'm impressed how you used the required words so that they fit seamlessly and don't sound contrived. I usually skip the contests that force me to use certain words.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2018 4:56:00 PM

I was surprised I managed to get the words in and for it to make sense. I enter fewer and fewer contests these days and will only write if they really inspire me:-) hugs JAN xx

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 12:15:00 AM

Jan.. you are so naturally humorous. Tie that to your gifted pen and you deliver treat after treat like this. You're poetry is like fresh air (except when it's about poop, haha).

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2018 2:47:00 AM

ha ha ha I will always try and write with humour, some may not like my style but there isn't enough humour in the world my friend especially on soup:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/5/2018 4:04:00 PM

very funny, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 5:03:00 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/5/2018 3:58:00 PM

Love it your Rush is huge and this from another Sister . lol Please will you read my poem I want her for my Daughter in Law Son. I hope you may like it . Cheers

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/5/2018 1:57:00 PM

Glad you said her or I might be offended...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 2:25:00 PM

lol Tim:-) hugs Janxx

Chris Hagy

Date: 7/5/2018 1:49:00 PM

Very creative use of your words Jan...and haha! Yep...age happens! Have a "guilt free" day :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 2:24:00 PM

thanks Chris, its our national day Tynwald Day, its been fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2018 1:48:00 PM

Hi Jan, As we age so does our bodies. We must be comfortable in our skin if we are a size 2 or a size 8. But I must admit it's a hard adjustment for the beauty queen with a huge ego. I wish you the best of luck in the contest :-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 1:50:00 PM

lol love that comment Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/5/2018 12:02:00 PM

Happens to the best! We all shine human! <3 sweet Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Kim, it was the best I could come up using the words for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 7/5/2018 11:49:00 AM

I adore her hair, eyes, eyebrows, and arms ... still. Shalom, shalom J

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 1:38:00 PM

aww that's lovely Anil:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2018 9:07:00 AM

- I was unlucky and asked a former acquaintance if she was pregnant ... she was not pregnant ... she was only twice as big as I remembered her from earlier ... I have learned ... my mouth is closed :))) - Excellent written, Jan - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 11:07:00 AM

oh how embarrassing Anne-Lise!:-( hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/5/2018 9:00:00 AM

Isn't karma wonderful, how the mighty fall. Good luck Jan. Happy Tynwald day. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 11:07:00 AM

oh Karma does come back to bite folks in the bum Tom lol:-) just been to a garden party fundraiser at mum's care home was great fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/5/2018 8:09:00 AM

You would never say anything to hurt someone intentionally. When I was in high school, there was a cheerleader who had an inflated ego and thought she was "all that." At a reunion years ago, it wasn't her ego that was inflated.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 8:15:00 AM

ha ha ha Lin I can picture that so well lol ,We can all say things that can hurt even if they were done unintentionally. we never had proms or anything like that and I've never been to a school reunion - would love to see how the bullies turned out - they made my life a misery:-( hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 7/5/2018 7:43:00 AM

Cor blimey Jan this is a hard task but what an amazing job you’ve done, much too difficult for me, well written and good luck in contest. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2018 7:45:00 AM

It was a challenge Roy, amazing we have similar ideas for different contests:-) hugs Jan xx