Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Lucifer." I chose this subject because I've touched on the forces of both Good and Evil in a number of poems I've written in the past and in my first published book. Lucifer (more commonly called now "The Devil," "Satan," or "The Dark One") was, of course, the Almighty God's fallen angel. Before his fall from grace, he was so anointed by the Lord God to dwell eternally in the throne room of Heaven in the very presence of God Himself. Most of us know the rest of the story: Lucifer's wisdom far exceeded that of the other angels and he knew well the ways of God Himself. In seeking total perfection, Lucifer began to jealously covet the very power on high of the Lord Himself. Putting his quest for absolute vanity and perfection before being humble and penitent was the beginning of his downfall with God. He was accordingly cast out of Heaven by God and was stripped of his beauty, heavenly sacraments, and powers. He thus became a symbol of false perfection and evil, and a tempter and deceiver of Mankind. Since I write my Tanka's in mutually exclusive pairs now, my next one will focus on the Almighty Lord God Himself; that is, if I discuss an evil topic in one Tanka, then I will then counter it with a discussion of something holy and good in the other Tanka. (Gary Bateman - June 5, 2015) (Tanka)  

Categories:  allegory, dark, evil, heaven, introspection, judgement, and mythology.  

Syllable Grouping:  5-7-5-7-7 = 31 Syllables; Total Lines (Verses) = 5; Total Words = 19. 

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Lucifer

Lucifer

Son of the Morning—
Symbol of false perfection.
Lucifer is thus . . . 
	A tempter and deceiver . . . 
Praise only Almighty God!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved 
(June 5, 2015) (Tanka)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Gary, intense and purposeful, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my Senryu 13, I would never have imagined it would get POTD what a wonderful surprise, now hopefully it will place in the contest
Bateman Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Hello BW!! Thank for your return visit and for your read here. Your Senryu 13 was a brilliant piece and certainly deserved being picked for POTD. And, therefore, it better place high, if not, "Number One" in the contest. (I will be rooting for you to take First Place!! Good Luck!!) Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 6:22 AM
powerful piece of writing gary with great insight
Bateman Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Thanks Liam Mate!! for your great comment here. I think the Leprechauns would now reward me with a great glass of fine Irish Whiskey. Best!! Gary
Breidenthal Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 2:22 AM
Beautiful work, Gary. "Son of the Morning— Symbol of false perfection."Love it. Always, Laura
Bateman Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Thanks Laura!! I will be releasing soon another Tanka opposite "Lucifer," namely: "Almighty Lord God." I find that approaching any topic usually gives the writer the option of covering the yin or yang of the topic. I like to do both so I can better compare and contrast things from a thematic approach for the reader!! Best
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 12:38 PM
- A snake in paradise ...... - Great tanka poem, dear Gary! (7) - I wish you and Ingrid a beautiful and relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 5, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, My next Tanka will be coming out tomorrow which will be entitled: "Almighty Lord God." You should check out too a "love poem" I posted early today ("How Shall I Say I Love You"). I thought you might like it. It certain met with Ingrid's approval!! I hope all is well with you Dear One!! Best Wishes for the Weekend, Gary
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