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Love's Sweet Refrain

From across the garden their eyes meet without strain as the quiet evening whispers love’s sweet refrain. The star light twinkles down on the night like rain; the scent of Jasmine in the air drives them insane, as the lovers care not their desires to restrain. The crescent moon smiles down on them with rapture as the quiet evening whispers love’s sweet refrain; the lovers yearn for their passion to capture. They come together and he touches her face as they hold each other in love’s sweet embrace. Their parted lips meet and hearts begin to race as the night becomes steamy and the lovers chase their wanton desires; soon the dance of love to take place. The crescent moon descends and dawn makes way as they hold each other in love’s sweet embrace. With their passions sated, they begin their new day, but the memory of their night, in their mind, still lingers… November 3, 2017

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Date: 1/6/2018 11:26:00 PM
Evident why this took a first place win. Very sensual and romantic. Congratulations.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you. Yes, this is one of my sensual, romantic writes; for some reason I seem to visualize these scenes much better than others.
Date: 11/26/2017 7:40:00 AM
A great poem, John. Congratulations on your 1st place podium win in the contest! Sandra
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/27/2017 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Date: 11/25/2017 7:24:00 AM
so beautiful! lovely rhythm and rhyme too, thank you and congrats on top placement :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/27/2017 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, and thank you for sponsoring the contest.
Date: 11/24/2017 8:20:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/27/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Date: 11/23/2017 6:05:00 AM
A lovely write, John! Congrats on a fine win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/23/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, your kind comments are appreciated.
Date: 11/22/2017 10:09:00 PM
Returning to congratulate you John on your wonderful win with your beautifully romantic write!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/23/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Susan
Date: 11/22/2017 5:04:00 PM
so beautiful and romantic John, :-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/23/2017 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, your kind comments are appreciated.
Date: 11/22/2017 4:11:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic write, John, I enjoyed this very much ... congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/23/2017 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory.
Date: 11/7/2017 1:11:00 PM
Very romantic, John. Sure to be on the winners list. sincerely, Elaine
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/7/2017 1:17:00 PM
Elaine, thank you so much for the kind comments. I appreciate you encouragement. John
Date: 11/6/2017 6:39:00 PM
Very romantic and sensual at the same time John! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Date: 11/6/2017 1:47:00 PM
- A pleasure to read, romantic of high class John :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 2:01:00 PM
I appreciate the kind words, Anne-Lise, thank you! John
Date: 11/5/2017 7:13:00 PM
wow, this is a beauty and your final line is PERFECT because that is how those events are. They linger forever in their minds!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, as always, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 11/5/2017 5:37:00 AM
A seductive and sensual write John. A beautiful expression of emotions and desire. Good luck in the contest...Maria
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/5/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments and visit, Maria. I’m glad you enjoyed. I enjoyed reading your poetry last night as well. John
Date: 11/3/2017 7:59:00 PM
A beautifully romantic write John with a wonderful rhyme scheme. Lovely love story well written with imagery passionately expressed. Excellent and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/3/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, glad you enjoyed. Your comments are always very much appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2017 2:24:00 PM
Very nicely written John. Good luck in the contest :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/3/2017 8:19:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for your kind words and visit.

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