Love's Surrender

Sun sends her Sweetness and Splendor Love's surrender Warm and Tender

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/9/2020 2:38:00 PM

I feel like that when I surrender to the heat of summer - better to enjoy it than to fight it-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 5:20:00 PM

A sage comment, Michelle. Much wisdom in your words. Thanks, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/9/2020 1:46:00 PM

Great write Gershon -sweetly romantic. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 5:19:00 PM

And thank YOU for the sweet comment, Jennifer! Light and Joy, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2020 12:57:00 PM

how charming GW love the rhyme and alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 3:49:00 PM

Thanks for the love on this one, Jan! Sweetness and Splendor! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/8/2020 11:07:00 PM

so sweet and wonderful Gershon.. Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 3:48:00 PM

OK! Happy -- oops -- Monday already in the Kingdom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/8/2020 9:22:00 PM

It was like a sauna here today, the sun got us truly! So warm but maybe not so tender. I like your repetitive S's in this one.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 3:47:00 PM

Repetitive S's sometimes turn into donkeys... Hee-Haw!