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I Dream of a Better Day

Tears cannot wash my sadness away, mourning memories of yesterday. And yet, today, nothing can be done, so tomorrow brings a cleansing sun. Falling in love's a lesson in trust, for passion's often fueled by lust. And lately, I'm feeling led astray by the sexual games that you play. White lies fuel love's funeral pyre and oft compete to ignite the fire. But like a phoenix, hope's born from ash, only to burn within anger's flash. Time verifies what feelings convey, eternal love's no more than a cliché. And yet, desire continues to bait broken hearts, left in a lonely state. Facing the inner core of my soul is like staring down an empty hole. And so, I dream of a better day, away from the hurtful things you say. (Rhyme) 5/02/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 7:47:00 PM
Lovely poem of introspection, Emile.
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Date: 5/25/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Line I appreciate your words of support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2017 3:29:00 PM
Emile, you have captured the heartbreak of love, but yet, the continuing search for it, so well in your beautifully composed rhyme. 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2017 6:10:00 AM
Your poem speaks to so many hearts Emile. This is beautiful! You had me with the first stanza! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/15/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 8:56:00 AM
Five terrific verses of monorhyme and all well done, Emile. I especially like the first two lines of the last verse. Well done and congratulations, Emile.
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate you taking the time to give me this great review my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 1:19:00 AM
This is so heartfelt, and sad. In wonderful rhyme. I don't know... I don't HOPE everyone has ever felt like this, but I surely did.... Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 5/14/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/13/2017 6:22:00 PM
Great rhymes as usual Emile, congrats on a great placement in my contest!
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Date: 5/13/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate the opportunity my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 12:29:00 PM
Whats left when lust is over? I found it hard to find what love was promised, Nice write, your good Emily.
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Date: 5/3/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Edward, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 5:55:00 PM
thank you for sharing poet
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Date: 5/2/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thanks, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 4:08:00 PM
I feel for the person you portray ... so often we end up getting our hearts broken and fingers burned in a relationship. Really lovely rhyme Emile. i would love to hear this set to music as it has a lyrical quality to it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate you taking the time to give me this great review, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 3:36:00 PM
Wow! This is so well written. I feel for this woman. Nicely done. :)
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Date: 5/2/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.

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