I Dream of a Better Day

Tears cannot wash my sadness away, mourning memories of yesterday. And yet, today, little can be done, awaiting tomorrow's cleansing sun. Falling in love's a matter of trust, for passion is oft fueled by lust. And lately, I'm feeling led astray; by the deceitful games people play. Betrayal builds love's funeral pyre while lies compete to ignite the fire. Like a phoenix, hope rises from ash, only to burn within anger's flash. Time echoes what my feelings convey, that true love is only a cliché. And yet, desire continues to bait a lonely heart: in its broken state. Peering into the core of my soul is like staring down an empty hole. And so, I dream of a better day; away from the hurtful things you say.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Lovely poem of introspection, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Line I appreciate your words of support my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Emile, you have captured the heartbreak of love, but yet, the continuing search for it, so well in your beautifully composed rhyme. 7, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Your poem speaks to so many hearts Emile. This is beautiful! You had me with the first stanza! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Thanks so much Connie, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Five terrific verses of monorhyme and all well done, Emile. I especially like the first two lines of the last verse. Well done and congratulations, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate you taking the time to give me this great review my friend, Emile.
White Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 1:19 AM
This is so heartfelt, and sad. In wonderful rhyme. I don't know... I don't HOPE everyone has ever felt like this, but I surely did.... Congratulations on your placement.
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Great rhymes as usual Emile, congrats on a great placement in my contest!
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate the opportunity my friend, Emile.
Snyder Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Whats left when lust is over? I found it hard to find what love was promised, Nice write, your good Emily.
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Edward, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
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May 2, 2017 at 5:55 PM
thank you for sharing poet
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Thanks, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:08 PM
I feel for the person you portray ... so often we end up getting our hearts broken and fingers burned in a relationship. Really lovely rhyme Emile. i would love to hear this set to music as it has a lyrical quality to it:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate you taking the time to give me this great review, Emile.
B. Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Wow! This is so well written. I feel for this woman. Nicely done. :)
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
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