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Your presence soothes me My breath matches yours Rhythmic and steady My thoughts radiate away Until I'm floating Awareness of how we align bringing beauty to my soul I don't know if this is a moment or all of eternity Existence is here Focussed Dream sequence that doesn't fade To be real is by your side The contradiction doesn't escape me So I hold your hand, to be anchored to a feeling and place That lets me rest

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Date: 7/24/2023 5:00:00 AM
Beautiful poetry ! When there is a hand to hold, when there is the loved one beside, life becomes sweet like a dream and one is led to a beautiful bower to rest and relax. You excel in Ekphrasis Dilly !
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Date: 7/24/2023 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for the high praise Valsa! I might do a few more - I really enjoy immersing myself in art :)
Date: 7/23/2023 10:18:00 PM
nice feeling, nice sharing, thanks
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Date: 7/23/2023 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Yann, just added the image too, you commented very quickly :) I'd only stopped writing it 1 minute ok :)

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