Lovely

Gardens with food and a flower to pulL All to enjoy and eat as we gO Red flowers and red watermelon I luV Days with fun in the sun then skin looking like gluE Everyone loves the beach water near the stone walL Now September is on the waY

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Joseph May

Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 AM

Very nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2024 11:15:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Double Acrostic write. It was fun but hard to write for your contest. It made me think/that is a good thing. Thanks for having it/for my placement. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away......................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/6/2024 2:09:00 PM

Paula, I'm back with a heartfelt CONGRATS! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2024 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Double Acrostic write again. It is always great to see you. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2024 12:39:00 PM

"3 Place" Lovely ~ Date Written: 6/26/2024 ~ Double Acrostic: The first letter of each line makes up a word. Here "GARDEN." Then the last letter of each word makes up a word. Here "LOVELY."

Terry Miller

Date: 7/2/2024 9:29:00 AM

Love this double acrostic, so much joy and fun in the words.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2024 2:04:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you love my Double Acrostic write & found much joy & fun in my words. It was hard to write but I enjoyed bringing it to life... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away......................

Ink Empress

Date: 6/30/2024 12:02:00 PM

Dear Paula, what a beautiful acrostic. I love it. And i agree everybody loves the beach water near the stone wall. Iv never been a fan of september for some reason. And i love everything about this poem! So much depth in what youv delivered. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light. Best wishes

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2024 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my Double Acrostic write to be a beautiful acrostic/I love it. I enjoyed bringing this fun one to life but it took extra time/thought. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Patti Pedrus

Date: 6/28/2024 3:46:00 PM

Awesome--short but deep and I like the end word of each line....creatively done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:50:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed reading my Double Acrostic write. It was hard to write yet fun. Thanks for saying it was Awesome. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/28/2024 11:04:00 AM

Delightful poem, Paula! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my Double Acrostic write to be a Delightful poem. I enjoyed bringing this summer fun one to life. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Tonye George

Date: 6/28/2024 10:39:00 AM

I love gardens and flowers and I've thought of having one. It makes you feel so close to nature and Mother Earth and there's something to munch on always. Very calming piece, Paula. Cheers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my write to be a Very calming piece. I love gardens/flowers but have none here. Pink roses I love the best... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/28/2024 10:39:00 AM

Using garden and lovely for your acrostic poem is wonderful. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Best for a win. Glad you enjoyed reading my write. I enjoyed bringing this hard one to life. It was fun but took extra time... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/27/2024 2:30:00 PM

I got it right away, Garden Lovely. At first I thought you needed glasses lol. This was so much fun to read. Not sure I can do this. xhugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2024 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Double Acrostic write. It was fun to bring to life but took extra time/thought. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away......................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2024 9:45:00 AM

paula, fascinating acrostic you've sewn here...I personally can't make this one out yet...cheers!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:01:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my write. Double Acrostic: The first letter of each line makes up a word. Here "GARDEN." Then the last letter of each word makes up a word. Here "LOVELY." Hope this helps... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/27/2024 8:44:00 AM

A garden of plenty is very reassuring. Flowers on the table bring sunshine inside. This is an outstanding poem of summer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my write to be an outstanding poem of summer. I enjoyed writing this summer fun one. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/27/2024 6:54:00 AM

I enjoyed your lovely acrostic Paula. I hope you have a beautiful day :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my write to be a lovely acrostic. It took extra time but I enjoyed it. Hugs... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/27/2024 6:27:00 AM

Dear Paula, I loved your acrostics both ways. It was very creative, and I love plants, so everything about your poem was very fulfilling to read, no matter what direction it went. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:54:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed reading my write. It was hard to write but a lot of fun. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/27/2024 12:45:00 AM

You hit all the right notes here, Gardens, flowers, watermelons and the fall, my favorite time!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:52:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my write. It is a great time of the year. Also all my favorites. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/26/2024 9:33:00 PM

Your double acrostic is simply amazing, Paula! The garden depicted is one I'd love to visit. This gem is a fave.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my write & found my double acrostic to be simply amazing. I see, this gem is a fave??? Thank You... Your very kind words have put a big smile on my heart. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Valsa George

Date: 6/26/2024 8:53:00 PM

Your Garden is lovely.... ! An ingeniously crafted acrostic. Dear Paula, all the Best in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for all the Best in the contest. Glad you found my write to be An ingeniously crafted acrostic. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/26/2024 2:30:00 PM

Help! Let’s keep the beauty of summer. We have two more months before September. …. Am I right. I like Summer nights a lot. Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:39:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my write. I love the summer nights after they cool off from the hot day. Summer will be gone before we know it. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/26/2024 10:21:00 AM

lovely get away; water, beach, soulful thoughts and relationship to life and form. Blessings my friend. "Days with fun in the sun then skin looking like gluE" Love it. 116 in Phoenix the other day. I get it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Yes, it can be hot out there in the Summer time. Glad you enjoyed my write. I see you say, 116 in Phoenix the other day. Guess you are close to the area. You can Soup mail me.... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2024 8:23:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go..These are not so easy to write but you have done a good work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2024 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Yes, these are Not easy to write. It took some time/thought. Glad you enjoyed it.... Enjoy your Summer as you write it away.......................

Paul Bell

Date: 6/26/2024 8:09:00 AM

Wow Paula, thought I had fallen asleep and missed a couple of months. Jump in the river near me and you come out radio active.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2024 9:54:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. No radio active swim for me. The Summer is here but will be gone fast. Enjoy your Summer as you write it away......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2024 7:56:00 AM

Lovely ~ Date Written: 6/26/2024 ~ Double Acrostic: The first letter of each line makes up a word. Here "GARDEN." Then the last letter of each word makes up a word. Here "LOVELY."