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Loves Window

Love feels like it has gone far away She used to exist everywhere it seems Now she hides in fear of being used up or let down Most now, don’t even remember what she feels like I remember long ago Love used to have big bright colors lightening bugs would soar through the night sky with dancing white beams that glowed in the dark four leaf clovers would spring from green pines of grass but would ever elude being found and plucked by those wanting a taste of its Irish good luck floral beach balls and pink rubber kick balls were the center of summers delight camp fire girls adorned navy blue vests and strutted proudly holding red white and blue flags down main street on Memorial Day lazy polka dot burnt orange black lady bugs would sleep under the sun waiting to be scooped up each child hoping to find the lady with the most dots to win the game cotton candy colored May Day dances held in the public-school yard always on the hottest and sunniest day of the year each student excited about dressing up in colorful garbs from different cultures around the world Love was innocent then... Love had the best aromas too tide detergent, vanilla extract talcum powder, wonder bread sweet potato pie hot dogs on toasted rolls at the public pool Chanel #5 on Church Sundays lots of Chanel #5 Love had the most wonderful sounds the rustle of fall leaves under your feet the crunch of plastic sofa covers at grandma’s house sitting on the porch listening to night crickets on dad’s lap Maybe love is actually still here Waiting for us to love her back She has not been treated well lately I hope that she will give us all another chance And come back soon Hopefully this time She will stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/23/2022 10:13:00 AM
Your work is truly amazing A really well written read Keep writing Best wishes from London, England Please feel free to read my poetry comment, like or share
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Date: 4/13/2022 10:26:00 PM
I really love this poem. :)
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Date: 3/19/2022 12:44:00 PM
A beautiful poem about love, and so true. I'm facing this one!
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:52:00 PM
I love it. Excellent poem. Kudos on a job well done. Beau travail.
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Date: 3/17/2022 11:22:00 AM
Really like this poem, Gabrielle. Thank you.
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Date: 3/6/2019 12:54:00 AM
A well crafted lovely poem, Gabrielle. Please read my new poem: OBLITERATE RAINY DARK Thanks....
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:09:00 AM
Hello Gabrielle Jordan, I think that love will return when she is ready to do so. A lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2019 2:26:00 PM
Just dropping in to say "Happy New Year", my friend! Wishing you all the very best!! ;)
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:51:00 AM
Great memories Gabrielle, such a lovely stroll down memory lane; makes me tear up in hindsight. Well done.
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Date: 12/25/2018 12:10:00 PM
Gabrielle, Grand, Brillant, Excellent write... Reminds me of the poet I wrote called "This is My Grandmother" Your Love Window is a fav for me James
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Date: 12/11/2018 12:21:00 PM
Gorgeous! I love every single line!!! (And the crinkle of the plastic couch covers made me smile...) Fantastic write, my friend- an instant FAV for me!
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 12/11/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Rhona...To the good times!!!
Date: 12/10/2018 7:15:00 PM
A lovely write indeed...fond memories of day gone by when love was alive...maybe when we were alive...All the best Gabrielle
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 12/10/2018 7:46:00 PM
Yes Arturo, when we were still alive..

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