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Loves Window

Love feels like it has gone far away
She used to exist everywhere it seems
Now she hides in fear of being used up or let down

Most now, don’t even remember what she feels like

I remember long ago


Love used to have big bright colors 

lightening bugs would soar through the night sky
with dancing white beams that glowed in the dark 

four leaf clovers would spring from green pines of grass 
but would ever elude being found and plucked 
by those wanting a taste of its Irish good luck

floral beach balls and pink rubber kick balls were the center of summers delight 

camp fire girls adorned navy blue vests and strutted proudly holding red white and blue flags down main street on Memorial Day 

lazy polka dot burnt orange black lady bugs 
would sleep under the sun 
waiting to be scooped up 

each child hoping to find the lady 
with the most dots
to win the game
 
cotton candy colored May Day dances held in the public-school yard always on the hottest and sunniest day of the year 

each student excited about dressing up in colorful garbs from different cultures around the world

Love was innocent then...


Love had the best aromas too
 
tide detergent, vanilla extract 
talcum powder, wonder bread 
sweet potato pie 
hot dogs on toasted rolls at the public pool 
Chanel #5 on Church Sundays 
lots of Chanel #5


Love had the most wonderful sounds
 
the rustle of fall leaves under your feet 
the crunch of plastic sofa covers at grandma’s house
sitting on the porch listening to night crickets on dad’s lap 

Maybe love is actually still here
Waiting for us to love her back
She has not been treated well lately

I hope that she will give us all another chance

And come back soon

Hopefully this time 

She will stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/23/2022 10:13:00 AM
Your work is truly amazing A really well written read Keep writing Best wishes from London, England Please feel free to read my poetry comment, like or share
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Date: 4/13/2022 10:26:00 PM
I really love this poem. :)
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Date: 3/19/2022 12:44:00 PM
A beautiful poem about love, and so true. I'm facing this one!
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:52:00 PM
I love it. Excellent poem. Kudos on a job well done. Beau travail.
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Date: 3/17/2022 11:22:00 AM
Really like this poem, Gabrielle. Thank you.
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Date: 3/6/2019 12:54:00 AM
A well crafted lovely poem, Gabrielle. Please read my new poem: OBLITERATE RAINY DARK Thanks....
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:09:00 AM
Hello Gabrielle Jordan, I think that love will return when she is ready to do so. A lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2019 2:26:00 PM
Just dropping in to say "Happy New Year", my friend! Wishing you all the very best!! ;)
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:51:00 AM
Great memories Gabrielle, such a lovely stroll down memory lane; makes me tear up in hindsight. Well done.
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Date: 12/25/2018 12:10:00 PM
Gabrielle, Grand, Brillant, Excellent write... Reminds me of the poet I wrote called "This is My Grandmother" Your Love Window is a fav for me James
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Date: 12/11/2018 12:21:00 PM
Gorgeous! I love every single line!!! (And the crinkle of the plastic couch covers made me smile...) Fantastic write, my friend- an instant FAV for me!
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 12/11/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Rhona...To the good times!!!
Date: 12/10/2018 7:15:00 PM
A lovely write indeed...fond memories of day gone by when love was alive...maybe when we were alive...All the best Gabrielle
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 12/10/2018 7:46:00 PM
Yes Arturo, when we were still alive..

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