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Love Whispers

I whispered my love to the wind, It floated in the breeze and died, I whispered my love to the sea, It rode on the waves and vanished, I whispered my love to the sun, It spread with the rays and melted, I whispered my love to the hills, It reached the summit and faded, I whispered my love to a plant, It folded its leaves and wilted, I whispered my love to a bird, It sang a dirge and flew away, I whispered my love to my love, And he whispered it back to me. 06.12.2020 N/A in Whisper to me contest Sponsored by Regina Riddle

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Date: 7/7/2020 1:30:00 PM
This is such a gorgeous poem Jo! I love how your muse progresses in emotions with each verse. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! :)
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Date: 7/6/2020 7:56:00 PM
Jo, I love this and the pattern you developed with the different elements of nature, contrasted with the final quatrain of your love's endearing reply. Sweet and romantic. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:34:00 PM
Loved this one Jo, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 6/15/2020 4:10:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Jo Daniel.
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Date: 6/14/2020 3:47:00 PM
I love your entry and I love your ending. A memorable poem I won’t soon forget Jo! I am putting this into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 8:04:00 PM
That was so nice. I just love that special ending on it! Wish we could know who the winners of the contest had been.
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Date: 6/12/2020 3:49:00 PM
Well composed Jo with a hint of romance at the end. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 6/12/2020 7:06:00 AM
Beautifully done, Jo! Anticipation builds with every line and the ending line, of course, is awesome.
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:12:00 AM
so beautiful loving poem penned......pleasure to read
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