Love Revisited

Love Revisited

He welcomed the somber silence,
and cursed the torpid time that had passed
since his last visit.
Invasive weeds had overrun the place:
Colorful weeds ‘tis true
strange purples, yellows and rusty reds,
scattered here and there
embellishing the lonely place.
 
He sat on a stone and stared into a void.
Memories rushed into being: 
memories long pushed back, 
where murky banks held telltale thoughts
he always wished to repress.
 
How beautiful she was so long ago!
Could he forget that beauty after so many years?
It was not important.  He loved her still.
A feeble bunch of forget-me-nots
Would mark the place he saw her last.
Were they enough to convince her soul
that he loved her still?  No matter.
She deserved more that a small poesy
of low cost frivolous flowers, 
bought on the spur of the moment
as if their offer would alone 
atone for his disloyal past.
 
Is it not strange that after all these years.
he had come to pay his respects?
To remember the good and the bad?
The happiness and the sadness?
The dreams and hopes 
and the disappointments
they shared together.

Yet together they made it, 
They survived until some years ago
A heart block killed her.
Now she lived in a better place
And he could do nothing but sit alone grieving
and thinking fondly of her.
All around was silence
Except for the dirge of the cicadas song.
In his yearning, he discerned:
sometimes love is not enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:53 AM
A sad write Victor, but your posy i am sure meant everything to her - it must be hard and especially when loving couples are parted by death. We know there will come a day when one of us will be alone, but i can't think of that, life is precious and we should all enjoy it as much as you and your wife did. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 11:31 PM
Sometimes all you have left are memories but they live on in your heart. Tom
Chuuk Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 8:01 PM
What a great heartfelt poetry! I love it and a fave for me.
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Very heartbreaking verse, bless you my friend
Daniel Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Heart tugging, soul rending poetry, Victor, when you lose someone you love, it's hard:) epic poignancy:)
George Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:56 AM
What a strange mixed pack of feeling this poem generates... one of sadness nostalgia, loneliness and love. I feel the decay and loneliness the place creates with invasive weeds overrunning. The tone of the poem tugs at my heartstrings. A beautiful poem dear Victor.
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 1:06 PM
So poignant this is, Victor. Great poetry. Sorry it's taking me so long to get back to folks with comments!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 7:04 PM
A feeble bunch of forget-me-nots Would mark the place he saw her last. AND Except for the dirge of the cicadas song…very nice, my friend!
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Lovely and sad, and the lingering tender memories of joy, make this poem stirring and engrossing. Blessings. :)
Fowler Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:08 AM
I'm glad you have wonderful memories Victor. They make living so much more pleasant :)
Edmonds  Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:29 AM
A lovely poem of reminiscence Victor, though you are hard on yourself, remember two hearts tenderly beating, ever endearing and constantly true, I’m sure your lost loved one sees things that way too… Belle
Turner Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Well written. So sad, Victor. loneliness is a bitter pill to swallow.
Volumes Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Memories are a treasure even when they make us sad, such a touching poem Victor.
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:18 AM
- A moving poem, Victor - I think love was enough... but, it can't always win over serious illness... and whoever is left can remember the good happy and the hard times... but, will meet a beautiful spring alone ... and the birds will once again sing and the sun shine :) - Have a lovely day and thank you for the beautiful Easter greetings, my friend :) - hugs
Ricci Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Good Morning Victor. Allow me to say thank goodness for memories to keep us warm through the cold. This entry is so quiet and gentle. Rest easy however because it is the quiet and gentle entries that make for the most beautiful and meaningful entries. Yes Victor, this entry has the emotive factor present. (smile) May today be all that it can be filled with everything good. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
Mcintosh Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 2:01 AM
So sad, yet beautiful. Your heart on the page, so beautiful... God bless you. Love, Gina
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