- Love Painting -

The way I feel, each day the bright sun would shine
  Your beauty extends into the heavens
  Together, we can live life to the fullest
  Two hearts are beating, strong and true


     Your touch paints the Heavens
     The fulfillment of my dreams
     I Can't Describe
     It is ... the way I feel
     It is ... the way I feel 


  I never knew about love and bliss
  You light up everything for me
  Make the world give us a little more time
  With our hearts bonded and melted


     Your touch paints the Heavens
     The fulfillment of my dreams
     I Can't Describe
     It is ... the way I feel
     It is ... the way I feel  


  There’s no easy answer for this marvelous feeling
  We humans always a need for fire and heat
  Together we're blessed with a perfect match
  A future where you and I always would strive side by side


     Your touch paints the Heavens
     The fulfillment of my dreams
     I Can't Describe
     It is ... the way I feel
     It is ... the way I feel  







 27.07.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Martin Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Well done Anne! Most memorable! And thanks for visiting my poetry.
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:06 AM
- Thomas, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 3:53 PM
very beautifully painted anne lise it sings of the page dear friend wishing you a lovely weekend
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 2:29 PM
- Dear Liam, it is a pleasure that you enjoy my "song" :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nunez Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:39 AM
Another feel good poem from you, Anne! I see it was entered into a contest. Hope it does well. I never got to join that one...was busy with other woeks...haha! Hope you're having a great weekend so far. hugs!
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 7:23 AM
- No win .... but, it's quite all right - Nice that you enjoy my song, dear Kim - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Feeling of love is very deeply and nicely expressed with excellent rhythmic words. 7+ and wish you good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:10 PM
- A pleasure to me that you liked my "rhythmic lines", dear friend Bl - Thank you for visit and a 7 - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Tender love the element that spreads through your hands to the canvas. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:46 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Beaufort Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:19 AM
You are just the most magical and sweetest poet! This is a wonderful feeling. You are blessed. So am I. Although I don't write about it, I have this wonderfulness in my life too. What this poem does for me is it allows me to take a few moments and think about what I have. Thank-you again for the hypnotic therapy.
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:35 AM
- A pleasure to share with you, Duke - Thank you for your beautiful words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sibanda Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Anne Lise , your painting of love here is an immaculate work of art!
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 3:07 AM
- Ndaba, it is a pleasure that you enjoy my "song" :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 5:00 AM
lovely poem that reflects the song well Anne Lise gl in contest hugs 7
Andresen Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 8:10 AM
- Shadow, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:26 PM
But I can describe it Anne Lise! It is lovely and romantic!! Painting love with words becomes music to our ears. hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:32 PM
- There is much beauty we can say about love ..... and many different ways of saying it - ..... and we can sing about love :) - Paul,thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 12:46 PM
this makes me feel sooo food, anne.. a beauty!.. happy day to you.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:03 PM
- Thank you, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Listening to the song while I'm reading your poem. Nicely done. Saw Jennifer Hudson at Legoland, Fl last year (Kind of bumped into her).
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 8:24 AM
- We never "bumped into" celebrities in Norway :))) - James,thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:35 AM
Beautiful pen Anne Lise! A very sweet n' romantic love song, my dear friend.Enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)Hugs!D.
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 3:35 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:04 PM
you're in the limelight, anne.. splendid piece from jennifer hudson's song... much enjoyed on a late tuesday!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:45 PM
...... "a star is born" :)))))) - It is a pleasure that you enjoy my "song", dear Nette - Thank you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Step up to the stage and take a bow...you where great! The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere charged with love. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:37 PM
- I'm too shy two stand on a stage ..... and I'm not good to sing :))) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:35 PM
I just love this A-L.... You were inspired.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:32 PM
- Tim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ryerson Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 5:32 AM
Well my friend, in my opinion, THIS should be set to music "Your touch paints the heavens"---WOW...
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 5:39 AM
- Thank you dear Tim, it was kind word - (music is not my "specialty", I can not a single note :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Hello Dear Anne Lise!! This one should be number one in the contest!! Best of Luck. This is a quite beautiful and most radiant write. One can feel your words when one reads your poem here. Outstanding!! 7 + FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:03 AM
- It is a pleasure that you enjoy my "song", dear Gary - Thank you for a 7 and a honored that you fav. this - A big thank you - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 1:46 AM
A love song that whispers to the heart promisses of bliss. Wonderfully done Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:20 AM
- A pleasure to me that you liked my "song", dear friend Demetrios - Thank you - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:58 PM
Well woven, Anne Lise, and it breathes really well. Lovely. Should storm the Poetry charts. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:08 AM
- Viv, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Anne-Lise, so beautifully penned , a winner for sure 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:07 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Beautiful words full of love. Makes me want to say ahhhhh I feel the love. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:06 AM
- Nice that you liked "my song" dear Phyllis - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hunjeri Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 5:35 PM
I love the idea of painting especially heavens. There is a lot of beauty in it. Good luck in the contest Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:05 AM
- Njeri, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:47 PM
:) Lovely, Anne Lise...You are a ray of Sunshine to me. Good luck in the contest, dear, and thank you for your visits and love.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:37 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, dear Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:41 PM
I dont know the song but this is beautifully romantic Anne Lise - love the impact of the repeated phrase:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:34 PM
- Long time since I've written for contest ..... just for support - Tried to make a love song :) - (not my strong side ...... I sing so badly :))) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:13 PM
I don't know the song but I really enjoyed your poem..good luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:36 PM
- Nice that you liked "my song" Frederic - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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