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Love Or Hate Minichu

Love spoons the heart’s deep pool Hate blights harvest moonbeams we treasure troves demand as a rule Passion towers over spiteful thunder bursts and showers Lush smiles douse brackish tart wiles Love spoons the heart’s deep pool over spiteful thunder bursts and wiles Date created : 28th February 2021 Sponsor : Mohan Chutani Contest : Let’s Minichu on love or hate NB Treasure trove refers metaphorically here to people as a source of love. Brackish as hateful, repugnant.

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Date: 3/5/2021 8:48:00 AM
Hi Howard, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Howard! Linda
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Date: 3/5/2021 4:17:00 AM
Howard, thanx for participating in my contest. you made a small mistake of not aligning the rhyme of middle lines with each other. Anyway, congrats for you placement. Best. Mohan
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Date: 2/28/2021 5:49:00 PM
Hi Howard, this is so stirring and evocative, I can feel the tingle of thunder - and the heart's love can overcome life's turbulence, well put~
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